Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct word choice and grammar, avoid redundancy, and limit to about 2–4 sentences. Give a specific example and reason using linking words (e.g., because, so).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I often browse shopping apps in my free time because it’s relaxing and I like discovering new styles. For example, last month I bought a new T‑shirt that I wear often because it’s comfortable and fits well.

Gợi ý: Improve fluency and accuracy by removing fillers and correcting grammar. Provide a clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I’m a student with a limited budget. For instance, I usually check two or three apps before buying clothes so I can find the best deal.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a direct answer, then give a brief reason and a specific example. Use correct verb forms and linking words like because or so. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: No, it isn’t difficult for me to decide. I usually follow my intuition because I trust my taste, so I don’t spend long thinking; for example, I quickly choose clothes that match my existing wardrobe.

Gợi ý: Clarify your opinion and give a clear reason with a relevant example. Avoid vague words and fillers, and correct vocabulary mistakes. Use contrast linking words like however or but. Keep it to 2–3 precise sentences.

Ví dụ: I don’t think expensive products are always better. Sometimes pricey items have poor quality, so I compare reviews and materials; for example, I chose a mid‑range phone because it had better battery life and reviews than a more expensive model.

× I often scroll my shopping apps in my free time because it can make me feel legacy and I enjoy looking at a new style and challenge.

✓ I often scroll through my shopping apps in my free time because it makes me feel relaxed and I enjoy looking at new styles and challenges.

Use 'scroll through' for the phrasal verb and 'makes' (third person singular) for subject 'it'. 'Legacy' is incorrect word choice; 'relaxed' fits intended meaning. Use plural 'styles' and 'challenges' to match general nouns.

× Sometime I buy some items, for example new T-shirt or goods one I say something I really like.

✓ Sometimes I buy some items, for example a new T-shirt or other goods when I see something I really like.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) and include article 'a' before 'new T-shirt'. 'Goods one I say' is incorrect; change to 'other goods' and 'when I see' for correct clause. Plural/singular consistency corrected.

× I like, uh, company precise when I shopping something, uh, because I'm, uh, I'm still a student, so I'm not have enough budget to buy something, So I like to, uh, check the.

✓ I like to compare prices when I shop because I'm still a student, so I don't have enough budget to buy things, so I like to check them.

Replace incorrect phrase 'company precise' with 'compare prices'. Use correct verb form 'when I shop' (not 'shopping'). Use 'don't have' for negation and 'things' for general plural. Add object 'them' for 'check'.

× Uh, no it isn't. I always follow my intuition when making choices, so I don't spend too much time overthinking. So I will spend a little time to make choice. I just choice my uh.

✓ No, it isn't. I always follow my intuition when making choices, so I don't spend too much time overthinking. I usually spend a little time making a choice. I just choose quickly.

Use 'usually' for habitual action and 'spend time making a choice' is correct structure. 'Choice' as noun needs article 'a'. 'I just choice' is incorrect verb form; use 'I just choose'. 'Choose quickly' expresses intended meaning.

× I'm not so sure about that because when the uh, product just just expensive and the quality is bad.

✓ I'm not so sure about that because sometimes a product can be expensive but have poor quality.

Use adverb 'sometimes' and modal 'can be' to express possibility. 'Just just expensive' is redundant; use 'expensive'. 'Poor quality' is correct adjective+noun phrase instead of 'the quality is bad'.

× Umm, in addition, uh, Chapter 1 also have many situation, for example, they have sharper price.

✓ In addition, there are also many situations, for example, they have sharper price differences.

Use 'there are' for existence and plural 'situations'. 'Chapter 1' likely misused; if referring to 'cases' or 'situations' use plural. 'They have sharper price' is unclear; 'sharper price differences' clarifies meaning.