工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I am currently a student at Seneca University, majoring in Chinese. In addition to my studies, I also work part-time to gain experience.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như số nhiều của "customer" là "customers" và câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I work part-time as a staff member at a cafe. My main duties include taking customers' orders and ensuring they receive good service.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu rõ ràng, ví dụ "everyone in years" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lắp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: To be honest, I think it is a good place to work because everyone is very friendly, and the salary is reasonable.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ thiếu động từ trong "people in my company very friendly". Bạn nên hoàn thành câu và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy working there because my colleagues are friendly and supportive. Besides, the salary is reasonable.

建议: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu và cung cấp thêm lý do hoặc kế hoạch cụ thể để câu trả lời đầy đủ và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: In the future, I want to work as a translator because my major is Chinese, and I enjoy helping people communicate across languages.

× I work as a staff member at a cafe shop which is my part time job.

✓ I work as a staff member in a cafe shop which is my part time job.

The preposition 'in' is used to indicate working inside a place such as a cafe, whereas 'at' is less appropriate here. Using 'in' correctly shows the location of the job.

× My main duty is to assist customer by taking their order then making sure that they are certified with the service.

✓ My main duty is to assist customers by taking their orders then making sure that they are satisfied with the service.

The word 'customer' should be plural 'customers' because the duty involves assisting multiple people. Also, 'order' should be plural 'orders' to match 'customers'. Additionally, 'certified with the service' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'satisfied with the service'.

× My main duty is to assist customer by taking their order then making sure that they are certified with the service.

✓ My main duty is to assist customers by taking their orders then making sure that they are satisfied with the service.

The phrase 'certified with the service' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'satisfied with the service' to express customer satisfaction.

× To be honest, I think it is a good place to work because everyone in years is very friendly and the salary is. OK.

✓ To be honest, I think it is a good place to work because everyone here is very friendly and the salary is OK.

The phrase 'everyone in years' is incorrect. The correct pronoun is 'everyone here' to refer to the people at the workplace.

× To be honest, I think it is a good place to work because everyone in years is very friendly and the salary is. OK.

✓ To be honest, I think it is a good place to work because everyone here is very friendly and the salary is OK.

The sentence has an unnecessary period before 'OK' which breaks the sentence structure. Removing the period corrects the sentence.

× Yes, I'd really enjoy the place where I work because people in my company very friendly and supportive.

✓ Yes, I'd really enjoy the place where I work because people in my company are very friendly and supportive.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'people in my company'. Pronouns need to be accompanied by appropriate verbs to form correct sentences.

× Yes, I'd really enjoy the place where I work because people in my company very friendly and supportive.

✓ Yes, I'd really enjoy the place where I work because people in my company are very friendly and supportive.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' which is necessary for proper sentence structure.

× Besides, the salary is reasonable and.

✓ Besides, the salary is reasonable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× In the future I want to work as a translator because my major is Chinese and I want to.

✓ In the future, I want to work as a translator because my major is Chinese and I want to use my language skills.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and I want to.' which is incomplete. Adding a phrase to complete the thought improves clarity and sentence structure.