工作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
I am working right now as Taiwanese lawyer.
考官
Where do you work?>
考生
I work in a private law firm with another lawyer supervised me.
考官
Is it a good place to work?
考生
The answer depends on the definition of a good place. For me, salary is a important factor, so working in this private law firm gives me a quite, umm, comfortable.
考官
Would you like the place where you work?
考生
To be honest, I don't like the place where I work. The main reason is that my supervisor just sit behind me. He can monitor me every day, every moment. For me, that is a huge stress.
考官
What are your future work plans?
考生
I'm going to quit this job in the end of this year and after that I will build myself loving and try to get cases by myself.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答时应注意冠词和词序的正确使用，例如在“a Taiwanese lawyer”中加上冠词，并且表达更自然流畅。
示例: I am currently working as a Taiwanese lawyer.
Where do you work?
分数: 60.0建议: 句子结构不完整，缺少连词和正确的时态，建议使用完整句子并添加连接词使表达更清晰。
示例: I work in a private law firm where I am supervised by another lawyer.
Is it a good place to work?
分数: 55.0建议: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免口头语。
示例: Whether it is a good place to work depends on the definition. For me, salary is important, so this private law firm provides a comfortable income.
Would you like the place where you work?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答较为清晰，但时态和词汇使用需改进，建议使用更准确的时态和丰富词汇表达感受。
示例: To be honest, I don't like my workplace because my supervisor sits right behind me and monitors me constantly, which causes me a lot of stress.
What are your future work plans?
分数: 60.0建议: 表达不够清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，建议使用更准确的表达方式说明未来计划。
示例: I plan to quit this job at the end of this year and then start my own practice, trying to get cases independently.
语法
× I am working right now as Taiwanese lawyer.
✓ I am working right now as a Taiwanese lawyer.
这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“lawyer”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。
× I work in a private law firm with another lawyer supervised me.
✓ I work in a private law firm where another lawyer supervises me.
原句中“with another lawyer supervised me”结构不正确，应使用关系代词“where”引导定语从句，并且动词应为第三人称单数形式“supervises”。
× For me, salary is a important factor, so working in this private law firm gives me a quite, umm, comfortable.
✓ For me, salary is an important factor, so working in this private law firm gives me a quite comfortable feeling.
“important”前应使用不定冠词“an”，因为以元音音素开头；“quite”是副词，应修饰形容词“comfortable”，且“comfortable”需要名词搭配，故补充“feeling”。
× The main reason is that my supervisor just sit behind me.
✓ The main reason is that my supervisor just sits behind me.
动词“sit”应与第三人称单数主语“my supervisor”保持一致，使用“sits”。
× He can monitor me every day, every moment.
✓ He can monitor me every day, every moment.
该句语法正确，无需修改。
× I'm going to quit this job in the end of this year and after that I will build myself loving and try to get cases by myself.
✓ I'm going to quit this job at the end of this year, and after that I will build my own practice and try to get cases by myself.
“in the end of this year”应改为“at the end of this year”；“build myself loving”表达不清，应改为“build my own practice”更符合语境。
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