工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但可以稍微简化，使表达更自然流畅，避免过长句子。

示例: I am a final year biomedical science student at Changkat University. I chose this major because I am fascinated by how the human body works and how medical research can improve health, especially by developing new treatments.

建议: 回答直接且清晰，但可以增加一些细节，使内容更具体丰富。

示例: I don't work yet because I am a full-time student. Currently, I am focusing on my studies and planning to look for a job in the biomedical field after graduation.

建议: 回答重复之前内容，未直接回答问题。建议针对问题给出假设或个人看法，增加内容的相关性和丰富度。

示例: Although I haven't worked yet, I believe a good workplace should have supportive colleagues and opportunities for growth, which I hope to find in my future job.

建议: 回答未直接回应问题，建议表达对未来工作环境的期望，增加内容的针对性和深度。

示例: I haven't worked yet, but I would like to work in a place that encourages learning and teamwork, as these are important for my career development.

建议: 回答内容重复且未具体说明未来工作计划。建议明确描述未来职业目标和计划，使回答更具体。

示例: My future plan is to work in biomedical research after graduation, focusing on developing new treatments for diseases to help improve people's health.

× Actually I'm a full time student now, so at the moment I I'm fully dedicated to my studies at university because I want to build a solid foundation for my future career.

✓ Actually, I'm a full-time student now, so at the moment I'm fully dedicated to my studies at university because I want to build a solid foundation for my future career.

句子中出现了重复的主语"I"，这是语法错误。应删除多余的"I"，使句子结构正确。

× Actually, I am currently a full time student so I haven't started working yet.

✓ Actually, I am currently a full-time student, so I haven't started working yet.

"full time"应写作复合形容词"full-time"，并且在连接两个独立分句时应使用逗号。

× Actually I'm a full time student so I haven't started working yet.

✓ Actually, I'm a full-time student, so I haven't started working yet.

同上，"full time"应写作"full-time"，并且连接两个独立分句时应加逗号。