工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“office affair”应为“office affairs”。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免冗余。

示例: I work as a public servant in financial regulatory administration, where I handle various office affairs.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“mainly responsible”应为“am mainly responsible”。此外，表达应更具体，避免模糊的“different tasks from different part”。

示例: I work at the Luyang branch of the National Financial Regulatory Administration, where I am mainly responsible for managing various administrative tasks.

建议: 回答应更自然，避免语法错误，如“prepare else exams”应为“prepare for other exams”。同时，表达应更连贯，使用连接词。

示例: For most people, this job offers valuable experience and career opportunities. However, I personally don't enjoy it, so I am preparing for other exams to pursue a doctoral degree.

建议: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免无关内容。

示例: I don't really like my workplace because it makes me nervous. I often have to prepare speeches or manage meetings, which I find stressful.

建议: 回答基本清晰，但有语法错误，如“a light career prospects”应为“better career prospects”。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子。

示例: In the future, I plan to quit my job and pursue a doctoral degree because I prefer academic work. I hope this will lead to better career prospects.

× I'm a public servant working in financial regulatory administration and responsible for office affair.

✓ I'm a public servant working in financial regulatory administration and responsible for office affairs.

“office affair”应为复数形式“office affairs”，因为这里指的是多项事务，名词需要用复数形式。

× I work in a branch of NFRA in Luyang of National Financial Regulatory Administration. In this job I mainly responsible for managing different tasks from different part.

✓ I work in a branch of NFRA in Luyang of National Financial Regulatory Administration. In this job I am mainly responsible for managing different tasks from different parts.

“different part”应为复数形式“different parts”，因为指多个部分，名词需用复数形式。

× In this job I mainly responsible for managing different tasks from different part.

✓ In this job I am mainly responsible for managing different tasks from different parts.

句子缺少系动词“am”，正确结构为“I am mainly responsible”，表示现在的状态。

× However, personally I don't like this job very much so I decide to prepare else exams and pursue A doctoral degree.

✓ However, personally I don't like this job very much so I have decided to prepare for other exams and pursue a doctoral degree.

“decide”应使用现在完成时“have decided”表示已经做出的决定；“prepare else exams”表达不正确，应为“prepare for other exams”，且“a doctoral degree”中的冠词应小写。

× I'm free to know.

✓ I'm not sure.

“I'm free to know”表达不自然且不正确，正确表达应为“I’m not sure”表示不确定。

× This joke make me very nervous in the whole day, in the evening, in the night.

✓ This job makes me very nervous the whole day, in the evening, and at night.

“joke”应为“job”，且“make”应与主语“job”保持第三人称单数一致，改为“makes”；“in the night”应为“at night”。

× This joke make me very nervous in the whole day, in the evening, in the night.

✓ This job makes me very nervous the whole day, in the evening, and at night.

主语是第三人称单数“job”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。

× I'm maybe preparing for the speech drafter or managing the meeting.

✓ I may be preparing the speech draft or managing the meeting.

“I'm maybe”表达不正确，应为“may be”；“speech drafter”应为“speech draft”，表示演讲稿。

× I'm maybe preparing for the speech drafter or managing the meeting.

✓ I may be preparing the speech draft or managing the meeting.

“maybe”是副词，不能直接用在“I'm”后面，正确用法是“may be”表示可能。

× In the future, I plan to quit my job and pursue A doctoral degree because I dislike the current work and find that I prefer doing academic work.

✓ In the future, I plan to quit my job and pursue a doctoral degree because I dislike the current work and find that I prefer doing academic work.

“A doctoral degree”中的冠词应小写为“a”，冠词使用错误。

× I hope a doctoral degree could bring me a light career prospects.

✓ I hope a doctoral degree could bring me bright career prospects.

“light career prospects”表达不自然，应为“bright career prospects”，用形容词“bright”修饰“career prospects”。