工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide relevant details without hesitation or unnecessary pauses.

示例: I am currently an undergraduate student studying Ecology at Baku State University, specifically in the Faculty of Ecology and Soil Science.

建议: Avoid filler words and unclear phrasing. Structure your answer clearly by stating your current status and future plans in a logical order, using linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I am not working at the moment because I am studying. However, I plan to pursue a master's degree abroad and then find a job after returning to my hometown.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about what makes the place good or challenging for work.

示例: From my perspective, it is a good place to work because the environment is adaptable. However, it depends on individual working conditions and preferences.

建议: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer. Avoid hesitation and unclear words. Provide specific reasons why you would like the place, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words.

示例: Yes, I would like the place where I work because it would be comfortable and convenient, with many facilities nearby to help me in my daily life.

建议: Try to speak more fluently and use correct verb tenses. Structure your answer logically with linking words to explain your future plans clearly.

示例: My future work plans are to first pursue a master's degree abroad. After completing my studies, I plan to return to my hometown and look for a new job.

× currently I'm a student bachelor student at the university

✓ currently I'm a bachelor student at the university

The phrase 'student bachelor student' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'bachelor student' to indicate the level of study.

× my study at the Baku State University and the Faculty of Ecology and Soil Science

✓ I study at Baku State University in the Faculty of Ecology and Soil Science

The phrase 'my study at' is awkward and incorrect here. The correct expression is 'I study at' to indicate the place of study, and 'in the Faculty' to specify the department.

× I am planning to do master degree in abroad after coming my hometown

✓ I am planning to do a master's degree abroad after coming back to my hometown

The phrase 'in abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not require a preposition. Also, 'master degree' should be 'a master's degree'. The phrase 'after coming my hometown' is incorrect; it should be 'after coming back to my hometown'.

× Uh, from my perspective, uh is a good place for work

✓ Uh, from my perspective, it is a good place to work

The phrase 'a good place for work' is less natural; the correct expression is 'a good place to work'. Also, 'uh is' is missing the subject 'it'.

× I would like the place where I am work

✓ I would like the place where I work

The phrase 'where I am work' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'where I work'.

× there are lots of stuffs near it

✓ there are lots of staff near it

The word 'stuffs' is incorrect; the correct uncountable noun is 'staff' when referring to employees or people working.

× I would came to my hometown and I searching for new job

✓ I would come to my hometown and search for a new job

The modal verb 'would' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'came' should be 'come' and 'searching' should be 'search'. Also, 'new job' needs an article 'a'.