工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, clarify your future plans with better structure and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I am currently working as an architect. I graduated last year and plan to pursue a master's degree in Italy to advance my career.

建议: Use articles correctly ('an architectural firm') and add linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide more specific details about your work to enrich the answer.

示例: I work at an architectural firm where we design various projects for clients. We focus on meeting their specific needs and preferences to ensure satisfaction.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct plural forms and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition for a more natural response.

示例: I love working here because we face many challenges daily, which keeps the job interesting. Moreover, solving these challenges helps us satisfy our clients, and their happiness motivates us.

建议: Work on sentence completeness and grammar. Use linking words to express contrast and improvement clearly. Provide more specific details about the changes.

示例: Although it's not the best place currently, my boss is trying to improve the work environment, which makes it quite good for us.

建议: Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity and natural flow.

示例: First, I plan to complete my degree. Then, I aim to open my own office, as my dream is to become the best architect in my country and eventually worldwide.

× I want to continue studying UH abroad in Italy, uh, and get my master degree and be more successful in my profession as an architect.

✓ I want to continue studying abroad in Italy and get my master's degree to be more successful in my profession as an architect.

The modal verb 'want to' is correctly used, but the sentence has other issues such as unnecessary 'UH', missing possessive form in 'master's degree', and awkward phrasing. Removing filler words and correcting possessive form improves clarity.

× I'm working at architectural firm as an architect.

✓ I'm working at an architectural firm as an architect.

The noun 'architectural firm' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in English grammar.

× there is so many challenges every day

✓ there are so many challenges every day

The phrase 'so many challenges' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number with the plural noun.

× If clients happy, we are happy too.

✓ If clients are happy, we are happy too.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' in the conditional clause. Complete sentence structure requires a verb to link subject and complement.

× my boss trying to. Change everything for better and it is quite good for us.

✓ my boss is trying to change everything for the better and it is quite good for us.

The modal verb 'is trying to' is needed to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'for better' should be 'for the better' to be grammatically correct.

× First of all I have to graduate my degree and then I will open my office.

✓ First of all I have to graduate with my degree and then I will open my office.

The verb 'graduate' is usually followed by the preposition 'with' when referring to obtaining a degree. The phrase 'graduate my degree' is incorrect.

× This is my dream to be best architect in my country and then world.

✓ This is my dream to be the best architect in my country and then the world.

The superlative adjective 'best' requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, 'then world' should be 'then the world' for clarity and correctness.