工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'high student'. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết.

示例: I am currently a high school student. I am 15 years old, and my favorite subject is history.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn với ngữ cảnh.

示例: I don't work at the moment because I am a student. I study at a school in Bogdan province, where I focus on my education to prepare for my future career.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại thông tin và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý đến cách dùng mạo từ và danh từ số nhiều.

示例: Although I don't work there, my school is very big with many buildings, so it would be a good place to work because the environment is fresh and pleasant.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'one of the biggest schools' và 'it has modern facilities'. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'their' thay vì 'the'. Hãy nói câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I like my school very much because it is one of the biggest schools in my country and has modern facilities, making it an ideal place to study.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu 'am' trong 'I am just 15 years old'. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và có liên kết hợp lý.

示例: I am only 15 years old, so I don't have a clear career plan yet. However, I hope to decide on my future work next year when I have more time to think about it.

× I am a high student at the moment.

✓ I am a high school student at the moment.

The phrase 'high student' is incorrect; the correct term is 'high school student' to indicate a student attending high school.

× my school I study is very big and have many buildings, so it's a good place to work because it's a environment, very fresh.

✓ my school where I study is very big and has many buildings, so it's a good place to work because it's an environment, very fresh.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'school'. Also, 'a environment' should be 'an environment' because 'environment' starts with a vowel sound.

× my school I study is very big and have many buildings, so it's a good place to work because it's a environment, very fresh.

✓ my school where I study is very big and has many buildings, so it's a good place to work because it's an environment, very fresh.

The phrase 'my school I study' is incorrect; it should be 'my school where I study' to correctly use the relative clause.

× my school is one of the biggest school in my country and it's had modern facility so it's their ideal place to uh, study and I love it.

✓ my school is one of the biggest schools in my country and it has modern facilities so it's their ideal place to, uh, study and I love it.

'biggest school' should be plural 'biggest schools' because 'one of the' refers to a group. 'it's had' is incorrect; it should be 'it has'. 'facility' should be plural 'facilities' to match the context.

× it's had modern facility so it's their ideal place to uh, study and I love it.

✓ it has modern facilities so it's their ideal place to, uh, study and I love it.

'it's had' is incorrect in this context; the present tense 'it has' is appropriate to describe current features.

× I just 15 years old and I have no clear direction to my work but maybe next year when I have time I think I would have my work plan for my life.

✓ I am just 15 years old and I have no clear direction for my work but maybe next year when I have time I think I will have my work plan for my life.

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am just 15 years old'. Also, 'would have' should be 'will have' to express future intention.