工作— Part 1 评分报告

× I was international students in Canada a couple years ago.

✓ I was an international student in Canada a couple of years ago.

这里的主语是单数第一人称“I”，所以“students”应改为单数形式“student”。另外，“a couple years ago”应改为“a couple of years ago”，表示“几年前”。

× I'm a freelance.

✓ I'm a freelancer.

“freelance”是形容词或副词，表示自由职业的，名词形式应为“freelancer”。

× Oh, you're like, I work at home, which means I have a flexible time, but sometimes when I work with the, uh, foreigner and I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have the time gap.

✓ Oh, I work at home, which means I have flexible time, but sometimes when I work with foreigners, I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have a time difference.

“you're like”不合适，应去掉；“foreigner”应使用复数形式“foreigners”；“the time gap”应改为“a time difference”，更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, I have a great patient on my work.

✓ Yes, I have great patience in my work.

“patient”是“病人”，应使用“patience”表示“耐心”；“a great patient”错误，且“patience”不可数。

× All of my colleague they uh, same age of me, so they're very easy going.

✓ All of my colleagues are the same age as me, so they're very easy-going.

“colleague”应为复数“colleagues”；“they”与前面重复，应去掉；“same age of me”应改为“the same age as me”；“easy going”应连写为“easy-going”。

× I like my place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not your local to office because we usually work at home.

✓ I like the place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not a local to the office because we usually work at home.

“my place”改为“the place”更自然；“your local to office”错误，应为“a local to the office”。

× I think I need to improve my skill from my colleague who has a variety experience.

✓ I think I need to improve my skills from my colleagues who have a variety of experience.

“skill”应为复数“skills”；“colleague”应为复数“colleagues”；“a variety experience”应为“a variety of experience”。