工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear, concise response with correct tense and avoid repeating words. For example, say "I started working last week."

示例: I am currently working; I started my job last week.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your workplace and role. Avoid filler words and repetition.

示例: I work for a company that runs the Start Smart programme from MIT. My role involves organising various events for the programme.

建议: Your answer is generally positive but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to structure your answer and be more precise.

示例: Although I have only been here for a week, I find it a good place to work because my colleagues are very helpful and supportive.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I like my workplace because my office is spacious and I share it with a colleague from the marketing department.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and errors. Try to give a complete, clear response with correct grammar and avoid filler words.

示例: I started working last week and plan to stay until August 2026 because I will move to Denmark in September for further studies.

× No, I'm working I I start my work the last week.

✓ No, I'm working. I started my work last week.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'start' for an action that happened in the past. The correct past tense form 'started' should be used to indicate the action occurred last week.

× I'm working in in a company that could start smart.

✓ I'm working in a company that started Smart.

The phrase 'could start smart' is unclear and likely a mistranslation or misuse. The correct phrase is 'started Smart' to indicate the company initiated the Smart program. Also, the repeated preposition 'in in' is incorrect; only one 'in' is needed.

× Is a program from Iommi of MIT.

✓ It is a program from Iommi at MIT.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'It is' corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'of MIT' is better expressed as 'at MIT' to indicate location.

× Uh, where? Where I organize the events and all.

✓ I organize events and so on there.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing to 'I organize events and so on there' provides a complete and clear sentence.

× The the gold workers are very good and helpful.

✓ The colleagues are very good and helpful.

'Gold workers' is likely a mishearing or mistranslation. The intended word is probably 'colleagues'. Also, the repeated 'the' is incorrect.

× I don't have any bad thing to say about it.

✓ I don't have anything bad to say about it.

'Any bad thing' is awkward; 'anything bad' is the correct quantifier and adjective order in this context.

× Yes, I like the place. It's where my office is very big and I'm sorry, my office with one more person from the marketing field.

✓ Yes, I like the place. My office is very big, and I share it with one more person from the marketing field.

The original sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'It's where my office is very big' is incorrect; it should be 'My office is very big'. Also, 'my office with one more person' is unclear; 'I share it with one more person' is correct.

× I don't have an accurate plan uh, I start, uh, to work last week and I'm gonna stay to this work until the August of 20,026 because on the September I will move to Denmark for my.

✓ I don't have an accurate plan. I started work last week, and I'm going to stay in this job until August 2026 because in September I will move to Denmark for my studies.

The sentence has multiple tense errors and awkward phrasing. 'I start' should be past tense 'I started'. 'I'm gonna stay to this work' should be 'I'm going to stay in this job'. 'The August of 20,026' should be 'August 2026'. 'On the September' should be 'in September'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'for my studies' completes the thought.