工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，注意动词形式，避免句子不完整。

示例: I am an undergraduate student at National Yangming University in Taipei. I study physical therapy because I enjoy helping people recover from injuries or diseases.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达工作地点和时间，避免重复和断句错误。

示例: I have a part-time job at a pediatric physical therapy clinic, where I have worked for about four years. The clinic was founded by my teacher.

建议: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，句子冗长且不连贯。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和语法，表达感受时用更合适的词汇。

示例: Yes, I think it is the best place to work. I enjoy helping children with cerebral palsy to become more independent, and seeing them smile makes me very happy.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，数字表达不清晰。建议注意名词复数形式和形容词使用，句子更流畅自然。

示例: Yes, I like my workplace. Over 100 children have received treatment at my clinic, and I enjoy seeing them become healthier and more independent.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议明确表达未来计划，使用正确的时态和完整句子。

示例: This is my final year at university. For the first two years after graduation, I plan to work at a pediatric physical therapy clinic. After that, I want to become a sports therapist.

× I really enjoy to help people from injury or disease and make.

✓ I really enjoy helping people recover from injury or disease.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式helping，而不是不定式to help。此外，原句中表达不完整，需补充完整意思。

× I have a part time job in a clinic of pediatric physical therapy and I have worked for there about four years.

✓ I have a part-time job at a pediatric physical therapy clinic and I have worked there for about four years.

介词应使用at表示在某个具体地点工作，for there是不正确的搭配。

× It is. Found the found by my teacher.

✓ It was founded by my teacher.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且时态应为过去时，使用被动语态表达“被创立”。

× I like to help the child who are suffer from cerebral palsy and I make them can work independently and smile at me which make me feel funny.

✓ I like to help the children who suffer from cerebral palsy, and I help them work independently and smile at me, which makes me feel happy.

child应为复数children，动词are后应接动词原形suffer，句子中多个动词形式错误，且表达不自然，需调整。

× I like to help the child who are suffer from cerebral palsy and I make them can work independently and smile at me which make me feel funny.

✓ I like to help the children who suffer from cerebral palsy, and I help them to work independently and smile at me, which makes me feel happy.

动词make后接动词不定式时应为make them work，而非make them can work。

× There are 100 of child who have received the treatment in my clinic and I like to see them become more healthy and more independent.

✓ There are 100 children who have received treatment in my clinic, and I like to see them become healthier and more independent.

child应为复数children，more healthy应为比较级healthier。

× The first two year I will go to the pediatric physical therapy clinic and after that I want to be the sport.

✓ For the first two years, I will work at a pediatric physical therapy clinic, and after that, I want to work in sports therapy.

year应为复数years，表达未来计划时应使用will，且表达更自然的职业方向。