工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应更直接地回应问题，避免重复和不必要的细节。可以先明确回答自己是学生，然后简要说明专业或兴趣。

示例: I am a student at Shenyang Music University, majoring in piano because I have loved music since I was a child.

建议: 回答不清晰且有语法错误，应直接说明自己是学生而非工作者，并简洁说明学习内容。

示例: I don't work because I am a student at Shenyang Music University, where I study piano and practice it daily.

建议: 回答过于简短且没有内容，应尝试表达自己的看法或理由，即使是学生身份，也可以谈论学校环境。

示例: Although I am a student, I think my university is a great place to study because it has excellent facilities and a supportive environment.

建议: 回答应更流畅且语法正确，直接表达对学校的喜爱并说明原因。

示例: Yes, I like my university, especially the library, where I enjoy reading books every day.

建议: 回答时应注意语法和表达的准确性，清晰说明未来计划并给出理由。

示例: In the future, I plan to become a piano teacher because I enjoy working with children and sharing my passion for music.

× When I was a child, I learned piano.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to play the piano.

learned piano 结构不完整，应该使用 learn to do sth. 的结构，表示学会做某事。这里应为 learn to play the piano。

× I like music, so I learned piano every day.

✓ I like music, so I learn to play the piano every day.

句子前半部分是现在时态，后半部分用过去时不合适，表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时。

× I'm stupid so I don't have a I'm in Shenyang University School.

✓ I'm a student, so I study at Shenyang University School.

原句结构混乱，语义不清，应该表达“我是学生，所以我在沈阳大学学习”。

× I major in piano when I was child, so for example, I exercise piano every day.

✓ I majored in piano when I was a child, so, for example, I practiced piano every day.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，major 和 practice 需要用过去式。

× I'm a student so I am a university every day, but I like my school library.

✓ I'm a student, so I go to university every day, but I like my school library.

am a university 语法错误，应该用 go to university 表示去大学。

× I can reading books every day.

✓ I can read books every day.

情态动词后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。

× In the future, I play to become a teacher, teach them piano because I have always enjoyed working with children.

✓ In the future, I plan to become a teacher and teach them piano because I have always enjoyed working with children.

表达未来计划应使用 plan to do sth.，play to 是错误用法。

× When I was a child, I learned to play the piano.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to play the piano.

该句语法正确，无需修改。