工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更简洁且语法正确。注意动词时态和单复数（例如："I'm currently studying"、"my main courses are"、"it gives"）。开头直接回应问题，然后用一到两句补充具体信息，避免重复。可以用连接词如“and”或“which”来保持连贯。

示例: I'm a university student studying accounting. My main courses are financial accounting, marketing and business management, which have helped me build confidence in solving practical problems.

建议: 回答应直接回应工作状况并简洁说明计划。避免重复已讲信息，注意动词形式（例如："I don't have"、"I will work"或"I plan to work"）。用一两句说明未来目标即可。

示例: I don't currently work because I'm a student. In the future I plan to work as an accountant in an office once I graduate and gain the required qualifications.

建议: 回答需要更自然和有条理，避免含糊词汇（例如“led by and relax”不清楚）。先给出总体评价，然后用具体细节支持（例如环境、领导风格、同事关系），并注意语法（"I really enjoy"而非"enjoying"）。

示例: Yes, I think it's a great place to work. The office has a relaxed atmosphere, supportive leadership and friendly colleagues, which makes me feel comfortable and productive.

建议: 回答要避免重复并使用准确词汇（例如“lead bike”不清楚，应改为具体设施或福利）。先明确表态，然后列举一至两点具体原因，用连接词使句子流畅。

示例: Yes, I would. The workplace offers a relaxed atmosphere and good facilities, and my colleagues and team members are very encouraging, so I feel motivated there.

建议: 回答应更具体并使用恰当词汇（例如“a super job”太口语且模糊，应改为"a suitable job"或具体岗位）。注意语法（"my plan is"、"I need to pass the ACC qualification"）。说明时间表或具体步骤会更好。

示例: In the near future, my plan is to find a suitable accounting position to build my CV. I also need to pass the ACC qualification, which is essential for advancing my career in China.

× Actually I'm a student, I'm currently study accounting at the degree level and my main course are financial calculation, marketing and business management.

✓ Actually I'm a student. I'm currently studying accounting at degree level, and my main courses are financial accounting, marketing, and business management.

这是现在时和动名词用法错误。应使用现在进行时或现在进行式的动名词形式“studying”。此外“course”与“financial calculation”搭配不自然，学科应为“financial accounting”，并且为复数用“courses”。建议在表示正在进行的学习时用“I'm studying”，并注意可数名词的单复数形式和学科词汇的正确搭配。

× I really enjoy my major because it give me more confidence to deal with some problems so I will continue my career.

✓ I really enjoy my major because it gives me more confidence to deal with problems, so I will continue my career.

这是主谓一致和单复数问题。“give”应与主语“it”保持第三人称单数形式“gives”。“some problems”可简化为“problems”。建议注意主语是单数时动词要加-s。

× Actually I'm a student, I didn't have any working experience and I'm currently studying accounting at the degree level and in the future I will uh, working in office work as an accountant.

✓ Actually I'm a student. I don't have any work experience and I'm currently studying accounting at degree level. In the future I will work in an office as an accountant.

原句中“didn't have”与现在情况不符，应用现在时“don't have”。后半句中“will uh, working”是错误的时态组合，情态动词will后应接动词原形“work”。另外“working in office work”重复且不自然，改为“work in an office”。建议根据时间状语选择正确时态，will后用动词原形。

× For me, it is really a good place for work, not only the working environment, it's also led by and relax, but also the people around me are always friendly and nice, so I really enjoying the working environment.

✓ For me, it is really a good place to work. Not only is the working environment clean and relaxed, but the people around me are always friendly and nice, so I really enjoy the working environment.

句中“it's also led by and relax”不通，可能想表达“clean and relaxed”。“I really enjoying”动名词用法错误，应为动词原形“enjoy”。注意句子结构“Not only... but also...”的正确倒装：当not only后接完整句时，句子要倒装。建议使用正确的形容词和动词形式。

× Of course, I'm really enjoying the place where I work, not only the environment, it also provides the lead bike and relaxing atmosphere, but also the colleagues, office and my teammates also encourage me a lot.

✓ Of course, I really enjoy the place where I work. Not only is the environment pleasant and relaxing, but my colleagues and teammates also encourage me a lot.

“I'm really enjoying”在一般陈述常用一般现在时“I really enjoy”。“provides the lead bike”短语不通，猜测想说“provides a pleasant and relaxing atmosphere”。去掉重复的“also”。并简化列举为“colleagues and teammates”。建议用一般现在时描述习惯性事实，使用恰当的形容词短语。

× In the near future, my working plans is to find a super job in order to write down my CV Umm. What's more, I just need to pass the ACC qualification because it is very important in China.

✓ In the near future, my work plan is to find a suitable job in order to improve my CV. Also, I need to pass the ACC qualification because it is very important in China.

“working plans is”中主谓不一致，应为单数“plan is”或复数“plans are”。“a super job”用词不自然，应为“a suitable job”。“write down my CV”表达不当，应为“improve/update my CV”。建议整理句子，确保主谓一致并使用自然搭配。