家乡— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shongothito korte paren. Prothome spostho kore bolun apnar hometown kothay, tarpor kichu specific details din. Linking words babohar kore uttor ta shongothito korun. Uttor ta 5 sentence er moddhe rakhun.

示例: My hometown is Naranganj, a large city in Bangladesh. It is located near the Shitalakshya River, which adds to its natural beauty. I enjoy visiting the historical sites there because they tell the story of our rich culture. For example, the old Mughal buildings are very impressive. Overall, Naranganj is a place full of history and nature.

建议: Apni uttor ta shesh korte paren nai, tai uttor ta asongothito mone hocche. Prothome spostho topic sentence din, tarpor linking words babohar kore specific details din. Uttor ta shesh korte hobe, jate puro kotha bujha jai.

示例: I like the historical places in my hometown very much. For instance, Sonargaon is famous for its Mughal-era buildings. These sites show the rich history of Narayanganj. Moreover, visiting these places helps me understand our culture better. Therefore, I enjoy exploring them.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo aro natural korte hobe. Prothome spostho topic sentence din, tarpor linking words diye supporting details din. Vocabulary aro boro korte paren, kintu shobdo gulo context er shathe mile.

示例: I have lived in Naranganj for over 21 years since it is my birthplace. Additionally, I enjoy living there because the city offers many facilities such as good hospitals, schools, and playgrounds. These opportunities make it a comfortable place to grow up. Therefore, I feel happy to call it my home.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o vocabulary error ache. Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shongothito korte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ta logical korun. Specific example dile uttor aro bhalo hobe.

示例: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it is a large city with many businesses. For example, there are several meal industries and factories that provide jobs. As a result, young people can find employment easily. This makes the city attractive for their future.

× It is situated nearby Shitalaka river and it has lot of natural beauties for explore and I love to visit in historical places and it gives.

✓ It is situated near the Shitalaka river and it has a lot of natural beauties to explore. I love to visit historical places and it gives me joy.

The preposition 'nearby' is incorrectly used; 'near' is correct for location. 'Lot of' needs an article 'a' before it. 'For explore' should be 'to explore' as the infinitive form is used after 'has'. 'Visit in historical places' is incorrect; it should be 'visit historical places' without 'in'. The sentence was also split for clarity.

× it has lot of natural beauties for explore

✓ it has a lot of natural beauties to explore

The phrase 'lot of' requires the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct: 'a lot of'. Also, 'for explore' should be 'to explore' as the infinitive form is used after 'has'.

× I love to visit in historical places

✓ I love to visit historical places

'Visit' is a verb that does not require the preposition 'in' before the object. Saying 'visit historical places' is correct.

× It is situated nearby Shitalaka river

✓ It is situated near the Shitalaka river

'Nearby' is an adjective or adverb meaning 'close by' but not used with 'situated'. The correct preposition is 'near'. Also, 'Shitalaka river' needs the definite article 'the' before 'Shitalaka river'.

× Shitalaka river

✓ the Shitalaka river

Names of rivers usually take the definite article 'the' before them.

× there are a lot of historical places in my hometown like Sonar.

✓ there are a lot of historical places in my hometown like Sonargaon.

The name 'Sonar' seems incomplete or incorrect; it should be 'Sonargaon', a historical place. Also, 'a lot of' is correctly used here.

× Sonargo bears a history in our country like Mughal empires.

✓ Sonargaon has a history related to the Mughal empire in our country.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'Bears a history' is unusual; 'has a history' is better. 'Like Mughal empires' is unclear; it should be 'related to the Mughal empire'.

× I love to.

✓ I love it.

The sentence 'I love to.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I love it.' to refer back to the historical places.

× Over 21 years I lived there because it is my birthplace.

✓ I have lived there for over 21 years because it is my birthplace.

The present perfect tense 'have lived' is appropriate to express an action continuing up to now. Also, 'for over 21 years' is the correct phrase.

× Since my birth, I lived there and really I lived the city because there are all opportunities and facilities in my city like hospital, education and playgrounds.

✓ Since my birth, I have lived there and I really love the city because there are many opportunities and facilities like hospitals, education, and playgrounds.

'Since my birth' requires present perfect tense 'have lived' to indicate continuity. 'I lived the city' is incorrect; it should be 'I love the city'. 'There are all opportunities' is incorrect; 'many opportunities' is better. 'Hospital' should be plural 'hospitals'.

× there are all opportunities and facilities in my city like hospital, education and playgrounds.

✓ there are many opportunities and facilities in my city like hospitals, education, and playgrounds.

'All opportunities' is incorrect here; 'many opportunities' is appropriate. Also, 'hospital' should be plural 'hospitals' to match the plural 'facilities'.

× my hometown is very big city and it is well reputed by business

✓ my hometown is a very big city and it is well reputed for business

'Big city' needs the article 'a'. 'Reputed by business' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for'.

× my hometown is very big city

✓ my hometown is a very big city

Singular countable nouns like 'city' require an article; here 'a' is appropriate.

× there are a lot of meals industries and factories.

✓ there are a lot of meal industries and factories.

'Meals industries' is incorrect; the correct term is 'meal industries'.

× For that reason people get easily their job.

✓ For that reason, people easily get their jobs.

The adverb 'easily' should come before the verb 'get'. Also, 'their job' should be plural 'their jobs' to match 'people'.