智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且回答要更直接，避免冗余。

示例: I didn't do many puzzles in my childhood because I was very active and preferred outdoor activities to staying indoors for a long time.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子连接不够流畅。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并且注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

示例: I usually do puzzles during long trips when I have nothing else to do, especially because there is no Wi-Fi on the road.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和词汇搭配不当。建议注意单复数一致和词汇搭配，同时可以丰富表达。

示例: I prefer word puzzles because number puzzles are tricky for me. Honestly, I'm not good at math since I'm not very comfortable with numbers and their formats.

建议: 回答内容较好，但表达有些重复且不够自然。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且句子结构更清晰。

示例: Yes, doing puzzles has many benefits for older people. It helps improve their mental and physical health and strengthens their memory, which is better than just staying at home using their phones.

× I didn't do many puzzles in my childhood since I was active and naughty children.

✓ I didn't do many puzzles in my childhood since I was an active and naughty child.

这里的主语是单数的“我”，所以后面的表语也应该是单数形式“child”，而不是复数“children”。

× Do something for a long time like.

✓ I don't like doing something for a long time.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。需要补充完整的句子结构。

× I will do puzzles during my trip since I have nothing to do else, especially for the long distance travelling.

✓ I will do puzzles during my trip since I have nothing else to do, especially for long-distance travelling.

“nothing else to do”是固定搭配，不能说“nothing to do else”。“long distance travelling”应加连字符变为“long-distance travelling”。

× Where don't have Wi-Fi on the road so I will try to do the puzzles during the travelling.

✓ There is no Wi-Fi on the road, so I will try to do puzzles during the travelling.

“Where don't have Wi-Fi”语法错误，应使用“There is no Wi-Fi”。“do the puzzles”中“the”不必要，且“during the travelling”中“the”也不需要。

× I prefer word puzzles since number puzzles is a tricky tasks for me.

✓ I prefer word puzzles since number puzzles are tricky tasks for me.

“number puzzles”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“tasks”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。

× I'm not good at maths since I'm not sensitive to the numbers and formats.

✓ I'm not good at maths since I'm not sensitive to numbers and formats.

“numbers”和“formats”前不需要加定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是一般概念。

× Yes, it will have a lot of benefits for old people to do the puzzles.

✓ Yes, it will have a lot of benefits for old people to do puzzles.

“do puzzles”是固定搭配，不需要加定冠词“the”。

× It will benefit for their mental and physical health instead of staying at home studying at their phone.

✓ It will benefit their mental and physical health instead of staying at home studying on their phone.

“benefit”后面直接接宾语，不用加“for”。“studying at their phone”应改为“studying on their phone”。