智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use simple and correct sentences, and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, make sure your sentences are clear and coherent. For example, say 'I enjoyed solving jigsaw puzzles in my childhood because they helped me improve my thinking skills.'

示例: Yes, I enjoyed solving jigsaw puzzles in my childhood because they helped me improve my thinking skills and gave me great pleasure.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammar errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me stay engaged and distract me from other thoughts.'

示例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me stay engaged and distract me from other thoughts.

建议: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to clearly state your preference and reason. Use linking words to explain. For example, say 'I find word puzzles more difficult than number puzzles because I have trouble focusing on letters.'

示例: I find word puzzles more difficult than number puzzles because I have trouble focusing on letters.

建议: Your answer is generally good but has some grammar mistakes. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, say 'Yes, I think puzzles are good for people of all ages because they enhance our minds and improve concentration.'

示例: Yes, I think puzzles are good for people of all ages because they enhance our minds and improve concentration.

× Yes, I did uh, puzzles in my childhood, especially the jigsaw puzzles which helps me to broaden my minds.

✓ Yes, I did puzzles in my childhood, especially the jigsaw puzzles which helped me to broaden my mind.

The verb 'helps' should be in past tense 'helped' to match the past tense context 'did'. Also, 'minds' should be singular 'mind' because it refers to the student's own mind.

× Also solving that puzzles I failed a great pleasure.

✓ Also, solving those puzzles gave me great pleasure.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Failed a great pleasure' is wrong; the correct phrase is 'gave me great pleasure'. 'That puzzles' should be 'those puzzles' to match plural form.

× I usually did budget also and I felt more bored because it helps me to engage more so I don't have to think other works to do.

✓ I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because it helps me to engage more so I don't have to think about other work to do.

The verb 'did' should be present tense 'do' to match 'usually' indicating habitual action. 'Budget' is incorrect word here, replaced with 'puzzles'. 'Works' should be 'work' as uncountable noun. Added 'about' after 'think' for correct preposition usage.

× Both have it so one features, but I feel more difficult on the puzzles, especially word puzzles because I couldn't focus on the alphabet.

✓ Both have their own features, but I find word puzzles more difficult because I can't focus on the letters.

'Both have it so one features' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'Both have their own features'. 'I feel more difficult on the puzzles' is incorrect; should be 'I find word puzzles more difficult'. 'Couldn't' changed to 'can't' to match present tense. 'Alphabet' replaced with 'letters' for clarity.

× Yes, in my opinion it is good for every age of the people whether they are old, child or young because it enhance and boost our minds more and also focus on our work.

✓ Yes, in my opinion it is good for people of every age, whether they are old, children, or young, because it enhances and boosts our minds and also helps us focus on our work.

'Every age of the people' corrected to 'people of every age'. 'Child' changed to plural 'children' to match 'old' and 'young'. 'Enhance' and 'boost' verbs need 's' for third person singular 'it'. Added 'helps us' before 'focus' for clarity and correct verb usage.