智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and avoid redundancy. Also, make your answer more natural by combining ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I did not prefer doing puzzles when I was a child; instead, I enjoyed playing video games.

建议: Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and organise your answer clearly with linking words. Explain reasons with specific details in a coherent way.

示例: I usually solve puzzles when I feel bored, especially if I have no friends to play with. I prefer puzzles because they help improve my IQ, thinking skills, and creativity.

建议: Make your sentences grammatically correct and clearer. Use linking words to explain your preference and difficulty level with specific reasons.

示例: I like solving word puzzles more than number puzzles because they require strategy. Although word puzzles are more difficult, I enjoy them as they help me learn new words.

建议: Express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases and explain your reasons logically with linking words.

示例: In my opinion, puzzles might be challenging for older people because they can cause mental pressure, which may not be beneficial for their health.

× No, I do not prefer to do puzzle when I was a child, but I prefer to play video games.

✓ No, I did not prefer to do puzzles when I was a child, but I preferred to play video games.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not prefer' with past time 'when I was a child'. The verb tense should be consistent with the past time reference, so 'did not prefer' and 'preferred' are correct. Also, 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' as it refers to the activity in general.

× No, I do not prefer to do puzzle when I was a child, but I prefer to play video games.

✓ No, I did not prefer to do puzzles when I was a child, but I preferred to play video games.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to the general activity of doing puzzles, which is countable and plural in this context.

× I solve puzzle when I am boring because in my boring time there was no friend who played with me then I prefer to play puzzle because it increase my IQ value and also thinkingness and creativeness.

✓ I solve puzzles when I am bored because in my boring time there were no friends who played with me, so I prefer to play puzzles because they increase my IQ and also my thinking and creativity.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' as it refers to the activity generally. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one or no friends. 'Increase' should be 'increase' agreeing with plural subject 'puzzles'. 'Thinkingness' is incorrect; 'thinking' or 'thinking skills' is better. 'Creativeness' is better replaced with 'creativity'. Also, 'I am boring' is incorrect; it should be 'I am bored' to express feeling bored.

× I solve puzzle when I am boring because in my boring time there was no friend who played with me then I prefer to play puzzle because it increase my IQ value and also thinkingness and creativeness.

✓ I solve puzzles when I am bored because in my boring time there were no friends who played with me, so I prefer to play puzzles because they increase my IQ and also my thinking and creativity.

The phrase 'I am boring' is incorrect; it should be 'I am bored' to express the feeling of boredom. Also, 'there was no friend' should be 'there were no friends' to agree with plural subject and past tense.

× I solve puzzle when I am boring because in my boring time there was no friend who played with me then I prefer to play puzzle because it increase my IQ value and also thinkingness and creativeness.

✓ I solve puzzles when I am bored because in my boring time there were no friends who played with me, so I prefer to play puzzles because they increase my IQ and also my thinking and creativity.

'It increase' is incorrect because 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'puzzles'. The verb should be 'increase' to agree with plural subject 'puzzles'.

× I like to solve word puzzle and also it is difficult be because of it strategy and I like to learn different word from this puzzle than I prefer to do word puzzle.

✓ I like to solve word puzzles and also they are difficult because of their strategy, and I like to learn different words from these puzzles, so I prefer to do word puzzles.

'Word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' as it refers to the activity generally. 'It is difficult be' is incorrect; it should be 'they are difficult'. 'It strategy' should be 'their strategy' to agree with plural subject. 'Different word' should be 'different words'. 'This puzzle' should be 'these puzzles' to agree with plural.

× I like to solve word puzzle and also it is difficult be because of it strategy and I like to learn different word from this puzzle than I prefer to do word puzzle.

✓ I like to solve word puzzles and also they are difficult because of their strategy, and I like to learn different words from these puzzles, so I prefer to do word puzzles.

The pronouns 'it' and 'this' are incorrectly used for plural nouns. They should be 'they' and 'these' respectively to agree with plural 'word puzzles'.

× I like to solve word puzzle and also it is difficult be because of it strategy and I like to learn different word from this puzzle than I prefer to do word puzzle.

✓ I like to solve word puzzles and also they are difficult because of their strategy, and I like to learn different words from these puzzles, so I prefer to do word puzzles.

The sentence is run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. It should be divided properly with conjunctions like 'and' and 'so' to improve clarity and flow.

× According to me, it is not good for older people to do puzzle because older people take a pressure on the mind to do puzzle and it is not a good way to to. Individual.

✓ In my opinion, it is not good for older people to do puzzles because it puts pressure on their minds, and it is not a good activity for individuals.

'According to me' is better expressed as 'In my opinion'. 'Take a pressure' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'puts pressure'. 'Do puzzle' should be 'do puzzles'. The phrase 'it is not a good way to to. Individual.' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'it is not a good activity for individuals'.

× According to me, it is not good for older people to do puzzle because older people take a pressure on the mind to do puzzle and it is not a good way to to. Individual.

✓ In my opinion, it is not good for older people to do puzzles because it puts pressure on their minds, and it is not a good activity for individuals.

The noun 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' as it refers to the activity generally. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to refer to multiple people.