智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

示例: No, I didn't do puzzles much in my childhood because I preferred playing with Lego. I found Lego more creative and inspiring since you can build different things.

建议: 回答中时态混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态，并且明确说明什么时候做拼图，避免无关内容。

示例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored at home. During trips, I prefer other activities like trying new makeup styles.

建议: 回答内容矛盾且语法错误较多。建议先明确表达喜欢哪种拼图，再说明原因，避免矛盾。

示例: I prefer number puzzles because I am good with numbers. But honestly, I don't enjoy puzzles much and usually prefer reading books when I'm bored.

建议: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达观点，并给出具体建议。

示例: I don't think puzzles are very suitable for older people because they often have poor eyesight. However, they can try simpler puzzles that are easier to see and solve.

× I don't really like the games like puzzles for for instead, I prefer playing Lego than puzzle because I think Lego is more, you know, instructive and inspiring.

✓ I don't really like games like puzzles; instead, I prefer playing with Lego rather than puzzles because I think Lego is more, you know, instructive and inspiring.

这里“like puzzles for for instead”中的“for for”是重复错误，且“prefer playing Lego than puzzle”中介词使用错误，应该用“prefer playing with Lego rather than puzzles”。建议注意介词的正确搭配。

× When you finished a building, you will.

✓ When you finish building, you will.

句子中“finished”使用了过去式，但句意是一般现在时的条件句，应该用一般现在时“finish”。此外，“a building”应改为动名词短语“building”。

× Although I don't really like playing puzzle, I still play them when I was when I felt bored because when I'm on my trip I have many things can do such as do a wonderful makeup.

✓ Although I don't really like playing puzzles, I still play them when I feel bored because when I'm on my trip I have many things to do such as doing wonderful makeup.

这里“when I was when I felt bored”时态混乱，应统一为一般现在时“when I feel bored”。“do a wonderful makeup”表达不自然，应改为“doing wonderful makeup”。

× when I'm on my trip I have many things can do such as do a wonderful makeup.

✓ when I'm on my trip I have many things to do such as doing wonderful makeup.

“have many things can do”缺少介词“to”，正确表达是“have many things to do”。

× I would like playing number puzzles because I think I'm good at number.

✓ I would like playing number puzzles because I think I'm good at numbers.

“good at number”中“number”应为复数形式“numbers”，因为指的是数字的能力。

× if you ask me I will choose play some boring games or just reading books when I was bored.

✓ if you ask me I will choose to play some boring games or just read books when I am bored.

“when I was bored”时态不一致，前面是将来时，后面应使用一般现在时“when I am bored”。“choose play”缺少不定式“to”，应为“choose to play”。

× I will say no because I think puzzle is difficult for whole every whole range of ages, especially for older people because puzzles need a good site.

✓ I will say no because I think puzzles are difficult for every age group, especially for older people because puzzles need good eyesight.

“puzzle is difficult for whole every whole range of ages”表达不正确，应该用复数“puzzles are difficult for every age group”。“site”应为“eyesight”，意思是视力。

× However, as we all know, old people have a poor eyesight so this may not good for them.

✓ However, as we all know, old people have poor eyesight so this may not be good for them.

“a poor eyesight”中“eyesight”是不可数名词，不加冠词“a”。“may not good”缺少动词“be”，应为“may not be good”。

× They can play some easy one.

✓ They can play some easy ones.

“one”指代复数时应使用复数形式“ones”。