智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some language errors and unclear phrases such as 'when I was a board' and 'imagery analyze'. Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I did a lot of puzzles in my childhood because they were a great hobby. They helped me think faster and improved my memory and visual skills.

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and informal. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use more formal language suitable for the test.

示例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because trips are meant for enjoying outdoor activities. Therefore, puzzles are a good way to pass time when I have nothing else to do.

建议: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'rap puzzles' and 'real puzzles'. Also, the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Try to clarify your points and use correct vocabulary and grammar.

示例: I enjoy both word and number puzzles, but I find word puzzles more difficult. This is because I am more familiar with numbers due to my education, whereas English word puzzles require more language skills.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing such as 'imagery analysis' and 'extra time spending on some physical things'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

示例: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they help improve mental agility and visual skills. Moreover, puzzles encourage them to engage in productive activities instead of spending too much time on mobile phones.

× Yes, I did a lot because it's a great hobby for me when I was a board and it trains me to think faster and also my muscle memory and imagery analyze.

✓ Yes, I did a lot because it was a great hobby for me when I was a board and it trained me to think faster and also improved my muscle memory and imagery analysis.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the speaker refers to childhood, past tense should be used consistently ('was', 'trained', 'improved'). Also, 'imagery analyze' is incorrect; the noun form 'imagery analysis' is appropriate here.

× Yes, I did a lot because it's a great hobby for me when I was a board and it trains me to think faster and also my muscle memory and imagery analyze.

✓ Yes, I did a lot because it was a great hobby for me when I was bored and it trained me to think faster and also improved my muscle memory and imagery analysis.

The phrase 'when I was a board' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'when I was bored' to indicate feeling uninterested or idle.

× I usually do them when I feel bored because during your trip is supposed to have fun and do other things instead of focusing on something that you can do indoors.

✓ I usually do them when I feel bored because during a trip you are supposed to have fun and do other things instead of focusing on something that you can do indoors.

The use of 'your' is inappropriate in this context as the speaker is talking generally. Using 'a trip' and 'you' makes the statement more general and appropriate.

× When you are like feeling bored, this is the way for you to kill time.

✓ When I am feeling bored, this is the way for me to kill time.

The speaker should use first-person pronouns ('I', 'me') to refer to themselves rather than 'you', which is second person.

× So I think it's better for me to do it when I feel bored.

✓ So I think it's better for me to do it when I feel bored.

This sentence is correct; no changes needed.

× Personally I think rap puzzles is more difficult because number puzzles is something that is quite easy for Asian because we did a lot of difficult maths when we were young.

✓ Personally, I think word puzzles are more difficult because number puzzles are quite easy for Asians since we did a lot of difficult maths when we were young.

'Rap puzzles' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'word puzzles'. Also, 'puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Asian' should be plural 'Asians' to refer to people.

× Personally I think rap puzzles is more difficult because number puzzles is something that is quite easy for Asian because we did a lot of difficult maths when we were young.

✓ Personally, I think word puzzles are more difficult because number puzzles are quite easy for Asians since we did a lot of difficult maths when we were young.

'Rap puzzles' is likely a mispronunciation or error; 'word puzzles' fits the context better. Also, 'difficult maths' is acceptable but 'hard maths' or 'challenging maths' might be more natural.

× But for real puzzles, especially English ones, we didn't talk much in English so it's quite hard for me.

✓ But for word puzzles, especially English ones, I didn't speak much English so they are quite hard for me.

The pronoun 'we' is inconsistent with the speaker's personal experience; 'I' is more appropriate. Also, 'didn't talk much in English' is better as 'didn't speak much English'. 'It's' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'puzzles'.

× Yes, it contains a lot of benefits for them if they do this because puzzles can train someone to think faster or like to improve their imagery analysis, as well as they can have extra time spending on some physical things instead of mobile phones.

✓ Yes, it has a lot of benefits for them if they do this because puzzles can train someone to think faster and improve their imagery analysis, as well as allow them to spend extra time on physical activities instead of mobile phones.

'Contains benefits' is incorrect; 'has benefits' is better. 'Like to improve' is awkward; 'and improve' is clearer. 'They can have extra time spending' is incorrect; 'allow them to spend extra time' is correct.