智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 文法と語順の改善に重点を置いてください。過去の習慣を話す場合は過去形や「used to」を使い、完全な文で答えます。答えは簡潔にしつつ、必要なら1〜2文で具体例（どんなパズルか、誰と解いたか）を追加してください。接続語は不要でもよいですが、話を自然にするために短い説明を付け加えると良いです。

示例: I didn’t do puzzles when I was a child. Instead, I used to play outside with my friends and ride bikes.

建议: 発話を自然で文法的に正しくすること。主語と動詞を正確に使い、短くはっきりした主文を述べた後に理由を一つ添えてください。接続語（for example, because, so）を使うと論理がはっきりします。

示例: Honestly, I don’t really do puzzles because I’m quite active. For example, I prefer going outside to play sports or meet friends.

建议: 質問には短く直接答え、その後に理由や代替行動を述べる練習をしてください。否定する場合でも「I don’t do them」などの自然な表現を使い、文法（助動詞、否定形）を正しく使いましょう。不要な言葉（umm）は控えめに。

示例: I don’t really do either type of puzzle, so I can’t say which is harder. Instead, I usually spend my free time working out or playing football.

建议: 意見を述べる際は簡潔な主張のあと、具体的な理由を1つか2つ述べてください。自然な表現（“good for older people”, “keep their minds active”, “prevent memory decline”など）を使い、不確かな表現（“how to say”）は避けて明確に言い切る練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they help keep the mind active and may help prevent memory decline. For instance, crossword puzzles and Sudoku can improve concentration and thinking skills.

× I never done. Puzzle in my childhood.

✓ I never did puzzles in my childhood.

The student used 'done' incorrectly; the past simple of 'do' is 'did'. Also plural 'puzzles' and a complete sentence are needed. Suggestion: use past simple 'did' for completed actions in the past and keep noun agreement ('puzzles').

× When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?

✓ When do you do puzzles: during your trip or when you feel bored?

This sentence from the examiner is fine but punctuation helps clarity. Use a colon or clearer structure. No grammar change needed for tense; maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× Honestly I'm not that person do puzzles I active person and I prefer go outside and do something.

✓ Honestly, I'm not the kind of person who does puzzles; I'm an active person and I prefer to go outside and do something.

Multiple issues: missing relative pronoun and incorrect verb form 'do' should be 'does' for third person singular within the relative clause; missing articles 'the' and 'an'; infinitive 'to go' required. Suggestion: use 'the kind of person who does' and include articles and infinitive markers.

× Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?

✓ Which is more difficult for you: word puzzles or number puzzles?

Question is acceptable, but clearer to combine into one. Use present simple 'is' for general preference/comparison. No tense change needed.

× I not do puzzles so I couldn't answer that question. I go outside to do something umm like working or do sports.

✓ I don't do puzzles, so I can't answer that question. I go outside to do things like work or play sports.

Use present simple negative 'don't' for habitual action. 'Couldn't' indicates past ability; use 'can't' for present inability. 'working' should be base form 'work' after 'like' and use 'play sports' or 'do sports'. Suggestion: use contractions and correct verb forms for habits.

× Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?

✓ Do you think it is good for older people to do puzzles?

'Old people' is not ungrammatical but 'older people' is more natural and polite. No tense change; keep present simple. Suggestion: use 'older people' for politeness.

× Yes, I think do puzzle good for the people because it can help to use brain and I think it prevent to be how to say.

✓ Yes, I think doing puzzles is good for people because it helps keep the brain active and, I think, it helps prevent cognitive decline.

Multiple errors: gerund 'doing puzzles' needed as subject; use 'is good' for linking verb; 'help to use brain' is incorrect — use 'helps keep the brain active'; 'prevent to be how to say' is unclear — corrected to 'helps prevent cognitive decline'. Suggestion: use gerunds for activities as subjects, correct verb forms 'helps', and precise nouns for meaning.