地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I don't like geography because I find it confusing. For example, when I studied topics like climate and economic systems in secondary school, I struggled to understand them clearly. As a result, my grades in geography were lower than in other subjects.

建议: Your answer shows some understanding but lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear opinion, followed by specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like 'however' or 'although' to contrast ideas.

示例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it provides important information about economic systems. However, I found some of the vocabulary difficult, which made learning challenging. Despite this, I tried different methods to improve my understanding.

建议: Your answer is too long and contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Focus on giving a direct answer with specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and use correct sentence structures.

示例: Yes, I studied geography in secondary school. It was a difficult subject for me, and I did not get good marks, which affected my overall grades.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear and concise response with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: No, I do not want to be a geography teacher because I am not interested in the subject. Although some topics like climate were interesting, overall, I prefer to focus on other areas.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer with specific reasons and use linking words to organize your ideas. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage.

示例: Although I am not very interested in geography, if I choose to study in another country, I would learn about its geography. This knowledge would help me understand the country's economy and support my future plans.

× I have read about a lot of things related to it in my secondary education and it just create a confusions for me.

✓ I have read about a lot of things related to it in my secondary education and it just creates confusion for me.

The verb 'create' should be in the third person singular present tense 'creates' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'confusions' should be singular 'confusion' because 'confusion' is an uncountable noun in this context.

× And because of these my percentage it's also quite a impacted like we can take an example of a chapter of any geography in this way.

✓ And because of these, my percentage is also quite impacted; for example, we can take a chapter of any geography in this way.

The phrase 'it's also quite a impacted' is incorrect. 'Percentage' is singular and requires the verb 'is'. The article 'a' before 'impacted' is unnecessary because 'impacted' is an adjective here. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I have study about their climate, their economic system.

✓ I have studied their climate, their economic system.

The verb 'study' should be in the past participle form 'studied' to correctly form the present perfect tense 'have studied'.

× Yes, of course, I feel that geography was really useful because it helps you given information about our economic system.

✓ Yes, of course, I feel that geography is really useful because it helps you give information about our economic system.

The verb 'was' should be 'is' to match the present tense 'I feel'. Also, 'given' is incorrect here; the base form 'give' should be used after 'helps'.

× But sometime there are such a words which which create a difficult, which create a challenges in front of me.

✓ But sometimes there are such words which create difficulties, which create challenges for me.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Such a words' is incorrect; it should be 'such words' without 'a'. 'Difficult' should be the noun 'difficulties' and 'a challenges' should be 'challenges' without 'a'. Also, 'in front of me' is better expressed as 'for me'.

× Yes, of course I have learned the geography in my secondary educations.

✓ Yes, of course, I have learned geography in my secondary education.

The article 'the' before 'geography' is unnecessary here. 'Educations' is incorrect; 'education' is an uncountable noun and should be singular.

× And moreover in such a subject I have not got a good marks which is really impacted my percentage of a seniors secondary education.

✓ Moreover, in such a subject, I did not get good marks which really impacted my percentage in senior secondary education.

'Have not got' is better expressed as 'did not get' for past simple tense. 'A good marks' is incorrect; 'marks' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Is really impacted' should be 'really impacted' to match past tense. 'A seniors secondary education' should be 'senior secondary education' without articles.

× No, I didn't want to become a geographical teacher.

✓ No, I don't want to become a geography teacher.

The question is about a current desire, so present tense 'don't want' is appropriate. 'Geographical teacher' is incorrect; the correct term is 'geography teacher'.

× But sometime there are there was a bit interesting concepts related to their climates, but side by sides there are some some temperatures which we have to be kept in mind that it was not my cup of tea.

✓ But sometimes there were some interesting concepts related to their climates, but on the other hand, there are some temperatures we have to keep in mind; it was not my cup of tea.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'There are there was' is contradictory; 'there were' is correct for past plural 'concepts'. 'A bit interesting concepts' is incorrect; 'some interesting concepts' is correct. 'Side by sides' should be 'on the other hand'. 'Have to be kept' should be 'have to keep' for active voice.

× Well I have already told to you that is not my cup of tea but if in case if I have to choose the another country for my higher education then I prefer to study about there geography, geographic geography also because it has to select a most preferable economy that will help to enhance my knowledge also and it also impacted for my it is also insignificant for my future that's why I will given a stress on it.

✓ Well, I have already told you that it is not my cup of tea, but if I have to choose another country for my higher education, then I prefer to study its geography because I have to select the most preferable economy that will help enhance my knowledge. It is also important for my future; that's why I will give stress on it.

'Told to you' should be 'told you'. 'There geography' is incorrect; it should be 'its geography'. 'Geographic geography' is redundant and removed. 'Has to select a most preferable economy' is awkward; corrected to 'have to select the most preferable economy'. 'Impacted for my it is also insignificant' is unclear; corrected to 'It is also important for my future'. 'Will given a stress' should be 'will give stress'.