地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by avoiding repeated words and giving a direct opinion with a reason. For example, say "I don't like geography because I find it boring."

示例: I don't like geography because I find it boring. When I was young, I studied it, but it never interested me much.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use simple and correct sentences to express your opinion and support it with clear reasons. For example, "Yes, geography is useful because it helps students understand the world better."

示例: Yes, geography is useful because it helps students understand the world better. When I studied it, I learned a lot about different countries and cultures.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect grammar. Try to answer directly and clearly. For example, "No, I have never studied geography because my major was engineering."

示例: No, I have never studied geography because my major was engineering in school.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has many grammar mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and logically. For example, "No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not interested in the subject."

示例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not interested in the subject and have never studied it deeply.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct answer and explain your reason simply. For example, "I don't plan to learn more about geography because I am not interested in it."

示例: I don't plan to learn more about geography because I am not interested in it.

× Actually, I don't like geography because it's it makes me bored.

✓ Actually, I don't like geography because it makes me bored.

The phrase 'it's it makes me bored' contains a redundancy with 'it's it'. Removing the extra 'it' corrects the sentence. Also, 'makes me bored' is correct as 'make' is followed by the base form plus 'ed' to express feeling bored.

× That's why when I was young I was studying geography, but it's not interesting to me.

✓ That's why when I was young I studied geography, but it was not interesting to me.

The past continuous 'was studying' is less appropriate here than simple past 'studied' because the action is a completed fact in the past. Also, 'it's not interesting to me' should be in past tense 'it was not interesting to me' to match the time frame.

× Yes, each very useful to all student because we have to run geography for our knowledge.

✓ Yes, it is very useful to all students because we have to study geography for our knowledge.

'Each' is incorrectly used; 'it is' fits better. 'All student' should be plural 'all students'. 'Run geography' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'study geography'.

× Then when I was young I studied geography and I told my knowledge is totally growing up.

✓ When I was young, I studied geography and I felt my knowledge was totally growing.

'I told my knowledge' is incorrect; 'I felt my knowledge' is appropriate. 'Is totally growing up' should be past tense 'was totally growing' to match the past time frame.

× No, I didn't because I was a graduate engineer of school.

✓ No, I didn't because I graduated as an engineer from school.

'I was a graduate engineer of school' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I graduated as an engineer from school' to indicate past completion.

× That's why I've never learned geography in my life.

✓ That's why I've never studied geography in my life.

The verb 'learned' is acceptable but 'studied' is more appropriate in this context. Present perfect 'I've never studied' correctly expresses experience up to now.

× Actually, I don't wanna be geography teacher because I've been, I've never learned geography people.

✓ Actually, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I've never learned from geography teachers.

'I've been, I've never learned geography people' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'I've never learned from geography teachers' to express the intended meaning.

× Then I don't want to learn geography as well.

✓ Also, I don't want to learn geography.

'Then' is incorrectly used; 'Also' or 'Besides' fits better. The sentence is clearer without 'as well'.

× That's why I don't want to be geography teacher.

✓ That's why I don't want to be a geography teacher.

The article 'a' is missing before 'geography teacher'. This is an article error (ID 22) but also relates to quantifier usage.

× Uh, if I'm gonna be interested about geography, I will, but I think I will never be interested about geography.

✓ Uh, if I become interested in geography, I will, but I think I will never be interested in geography.

'I'm gonna be interested about' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I become interested in'. The preposition 'about' should be 'in' after 'interested'.

× That's why I don't wanna study geography other country.

✓ That's why I don't want to study the geography of other countries.

'Geography other country' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'the geography of other countries' using the definite article and plural form with the preposition 'of'.