地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は自然ですが、"those stuff"の表現は不自然であり、より具体的な語彙を使うと良いでしょう。また、文の構造を簡潔にし、冗長さを避けることが望ましいです。

示例: I don't dislike geography; it depends on the topic. For example, I find learning about World Heritage sites very interesting.

建议: 回答に繰り返しがあり、"not not useful"は誤りです。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、論理的なつながりを示す接続詞を活用しましょう。

示例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand World Heritage sites, climate change, and global events.

建议: "ETC"の使用は口語的すぎて不適切です。具体的な内容を挙げ、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

示例: Yes, I am a high school student and this year I have geography classes twice a week, where we study heritage sites and climate change.

建议: 回答は率直ですが、理由をもう少し具体的に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いでしょう。

示例: Honestly, I don't want to be a geography teacher because although I am good at learning it, I don't feel confident enough to teach others.

建议: 回答は具体的ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を活用しましょう。

示例: Yes, I have studied the geography of other countries like the Philippines, including their farming methods. We recently had a test on this topic, which I found interesting.

× If it's about World Heritage, then I am interested in learning those stuff.

✓ If it's about World Heritage, then I am interested in learning that stuff.

'Stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be used with 'those'. Instead, use 'that' to refer to uncountable nouns. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× I suppose so it can be useful at some point.

✓ I suppose it can be useful at some point.

The phrase 'I suppose so it can be useful' is incorrect because 'so' is unnecessary and disrupts the modal verb structure. Removing 'so' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× If it's about World Heritage, then I am interested in learning those stuff.

✓ If it's about World Heritage, then I am interested in learning that stuff.

'Stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be used with 'those'. Instead, use 'that' to refer to uncountable nouns. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× learning the World Heritage sites, learning the climate change, and it's good to know about the happenings around the world.

✓ learning the World Heritage sites, learning about climate change, and it's good to know about the happenings around the world.

'Climate change' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'the'. Also, 'learning the climate change' is incorrect; it should be 'learning about climate change' to indicate the subject matter.

× from this year we have geography lessons which is like twice a week

✓ from this year we have geography lessons which are like twice a week

'Lessons' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× we are learning about heritage sites, climate change and ETC.

✓ we are learning about heritage sites, climate change, and etc.

'ETC.' is an abbreviation and should be lowercase 'etc.' and preceded by a comma. However, in formal writing, it's better to avoid 'etc.' and specify the items.

× people have a subject that suits them and I think that geography does not suit me in a lot of ways.

✓ people have subjects that suit them and I think that geography does not suit me in a lot of ways.

'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match 'people' and 'suit' should agree with plural 'subjects'. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and pronoun agreement.

× I am good at learning geography, but I don't think that I can teach the students.

✓ I am good at learning geography, but I don't think that I can teach students.

'The students' implies specific students already known, but here it is general, so 'students' without 'the' is more appropriate.

× Rather than learning the geography of Japan, we learned the geography of other countries like the Philippines, how their farming is going on and other countries.

✓ Rather than learning the geography of Japan, we learned the geography of other countries like the Philippines, how their farming is going on, and other countries.

The sentence is missing a comma before 'and other countries' to separate items in a list properly. Also, 'how their farming is going on' is awkward; better phrasing would be 'how farming is done there' but this is beyond grammar correction scope.