地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时表达不够自然，有些语句不连贯，且有重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词使句子更流畅。

示例: I enjoy geography because it helps me understand the amazing places around the world, which I find fascinating to explore.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，建议用更准确的表达方式，并用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: Yes, geography is useful because it helps me navigate daily routes between home and school, and it also assists me when I travel internationally.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意句子结构，避免断句，增加细节使内容更丰富。

示例: Yes, I studied geography in middle school. My teacher was kind and taught us a lot about both our country and the world.

建议: 回答较为完整，但缺少连词使句子衔接不够自然。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: No, I prefer computer science over geography, so I chose to major in data science in college because I want to develop my skills in that field.

建议: 回答中断句不当，表达不够连贯，建议用完整句子并用连接词连接观点和细节。

示例: Yes, I would like to learn more about other countries' geography. For example, I admire Singapore for its beautiful scenery, including many flowers and trees.

× I think it is, for instance, I need to know about knowledge about geography to master the daily routine to our schools or my home, and I can use it to travel around the world too.

✓ I think it is. For instance, I need to know knowledge of geography to manage the daily routine to our school or my home, and I can use it to travel around the world too.

这里“know about knowledge about geography”重复且用词不当，应改为“know knowledge of geography”。此外，“master the daily routine to our schools or my home”中的“to”用法不正确，应改为“manage the daily routine to our school or my home”，更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, when I was a. Middle school student chose to study geography and my teacher is wonderful and kind.

✓ Yes, when I was a middle school student, I chose to study geography and my teacher was wonderful and kind.

原句缺少主语“I”，且“a. Middle school student”中“a.”错误且大小写不当，应改为“a middle school student”。另外，时态应保持一致，描述过去经历时应使用过去时“was”。

× She really taught us a lot about geography between our country and the whole world.

✓ She really taught us a lot about geography, including our country and the whole world.

“about geography between our country and the whole world”表达不清，“between”用法不当，应改为“including”来表示涵盖范围。

× No Personally speaking I like computer science more than geography so I chose to major in data science in my college life and I really think it is a space I would like to expand in future.

✓ No. Personally speaking, I like computer science more than geography, so I chose to major in data science in college, and I really think it is a field I would like to expand in the future.

原句缺少标点符号，导致句子连贯性差，应加上句号和逗号。同时，“in my college life”表达不自然，改为“in college”更简洁。“space”用词不当，改为“field”更符合语境。最后，“in future”应为“in the future”。

× Yes, I really liked Singapore. I think it is a famous city and country for its wonderful. Sceneries. It has a lot of flowers and trees.

✓ Yes, I really like Singapore. I think it is a famous city and country for its wonderful scenery. It has a lot of flowers and trees.

“liked”时态不符，描述现在感受应使用一般现在时“like”。“Sceneries”复数形式不常用，改为不可数名词“scenery”。句中“wonderful.”和“Sceneries.”断句错误，应合并为一句。