地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容略显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I find geography fascinating but quite challenging. I started learning it in secondary school, where I had to study many maps and pictures.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且最后一句不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子结构，明确表达观点。

示例: Yes, definitely. Geography broadens my horizons by teaching me about the histories and cultures of different countries, which inspires me to travel and explore the world.

建议: 回答较为完整，但句子结构有些冗长且表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: Yes, I started learning geography when I was 12. Although it was difficult at first, I eventually found it fascinating and became very interested in the subject because it provides a lot of useful knowledge.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子表达自己的观点，并避免复杂句式。

示例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I enjoy learning about the world, I don't feel confident enough to teach others because I haven't mastered the subject fully.

建议: 回答表达有些笨拙，语法和用词不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

示例: Yes, I am eager to learn more about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand their cultures and important histories, which I find very interesting.

× I and I had to read a lot of pictures.

✓ I had to look at a lot of pictures.

这里的错误是复数和单数的问题，'a lot of pictures'是复数，但动词和主语搭配不当，且表达不准确。应使用'look at'而不是'read'，因为图片是看而不是读。建议改为'I had to look at a lot of pictures.'

× I still remember the days that I started about it, when I was in the secondary school and I and I had to read a lot of pictures.

✓ I still remember the days when I started learning it, when I was in secondary school and I had to look at a lot of pictures.

'started about it'中的'about'用法错误，应该用'started learning it'来表达开始学习某事。'in the secondary school'中'the'不必要，通常说'in secondary school'。

× It shows the histories and cultures of different countries to me and appealing me to go out and say the word.

✓ It shows me the histories and cultures of different countries and appeals to me to go out and see the world.

'appealing me'用法错误，应该用动词第三人称单数形式'appeals'，且后面应接介词'to'。'say the word'应为'see the world'，表达去看世界的意思。

× It was definitely difficult for me to learn about it, but finally I found it fascinating and interesting so that I'm obsessed with learning geography.

✓ It was definitely difficult for me to learn it, but finally I found it fascinating and interesting, so I'm obsessed with learning geography.

'learn about it'在这里不太合适，直接用'learn it'更自然。'so that'用法不当，应该用' so'表示结果。

× No actually though this subject really gives me deeper insight into the world and encourages me to explore different things. But I'm not confident to become a geography teacher because I can't master in love knowledge about it.

✓ No, actually, though this subject really gives me deeper insight into the world and encourages me to explore different things, I'm not confident about becoming a geography teacher because I can't master or love the knowledge about it.

'not confident to become'应改为'not confident about becoming'。'master in love knowledge'表达错误，应分开为'master or love the knowledge'。

× Yes, I'm delighted to learn more about the geography of other countries, and during this time I believe I will learn a lot about their cultures and key histories, which appeals me all the time.

✓ Yes, I'm delighted to learn more about the geography of other countries, and during this time I believe I will learn a lot about their cultures and key histories, which appeals to me all the time.

'appeals me'用法错误，正确用法是'appeals to me'，动词appeal后面需要加介词'to'。