地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors such as 'location the country' to 'locate countries'.

示例: I'm not very interested in geography, but I've studied it since I was a child. I find it fascinating because it helps us predict the weather and locate countries, which I think is really useful.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to be more specific and avoid vague phrases like 'like soy or agriculture like that'. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, geography is very useful in daily life. For instance, it helps us predict the weather and understand natural processes like soil formation, which is important for agriculture.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Avoid awkward phrases like 'quite easier' and 'as a favorable'. Use correct comparative forms and clarify your meaning.

示例: Yes, I've studied geography for 12 years. I find it a fascinating subject and easier than mathematics or literature, so I often enjoy focusing on it.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and complete your sentences. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'patience' instead of 'patient'.

示例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I enjoy helping children, being a teacher requires a lot of responsibility and patience, which I feel I lack, especially when teaching geography.

建议: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example, use 'geography of other countries' and 'it opens up opportunities'.

示例: Yes, absolutely. I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand different cultures and environments. Moreover, it opens up opportunities to travel and work for international companies in the future.

× Therefore I really appreciate that geography supports human to predict the weather or location the country.

✓ Therefore I really appreciate that geography supports humans in predicting the weather or locating countries.

The verb 'supports' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) when indicating an action it helps with. Also, 'human' should be plural 'humans' to refer to people in general, and 'location the country' is incorrect; it should be 'locating countries' to express the action of finding places.

× Yes, it's very helpful in our daily life, such as we can predict the weather or know about how the Earth creates or in some like soy or agriculture like that.

✓ Yes, it's very helpful in our daily life, such as predicting the weather or knowing how the Earth works, or in areas like soy farming or agriculture.

The phrase 'know about how the Earth creates' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'knowing how the Earth works'. Also, 'in some like soy or agriculture like that' is unclear and should be rephrased to 'in areas like soy farming or agriculture' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I guess geography is a very fascinating subject, which is quite easier than mathematic or literature.

✓ I guess geography is a very fascinating subject, which is quite easier than mathematics or literature.

The word 'mathematic' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'mathematics'. Also, 'quite easier' is not standard; it should be 'easier' or 'quite easy'. However, since the original sentence uses 'quite easier', the correction keeps 'easier' but the phrase could be improved further.

× Sometimes I will focus on it as a favorable.

✓ Sometimes I will focus on it as a favourite subject.

The phrase 'as a favorable' is incorrect because 'favorable' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. The intended meaning is likely 'favourite subject', so the correction replaces 'favorable' with 'favourite subject'.

× I love teaching some children around me. However, being a teacher is more like you have to take the responsibility on take care about the kids and I don't have that patient, especially on geography, which is the.

✓ I love teaching some children around me. However, being a teacher is more like you have to take responsibility for taking care of the kids, and I don't have that patience, especially with geography.

The phrase 'take the responsibility on take care about the kids' is incorrect; it should be 'take responsibility for taking care of the kids'. Also, 'patient' is a noun meaning a sick person; the correct word is 'patience'. The preposition 'especially on geography' should be 'especially with geography'. The sentence is incomplete at the end, but correction is made to the existing part.

× Yes, absolutely. I always want to learn more about other countries geography because I always want to understand the culture and environment around the world.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I always want to learn more about other countries' geography because I want to understand the culture and environment around the world.

The phrase 'other countries geography' lacks the possessive apostrophe; it should be 'other countries' geography' to indicate the geography belonging to other countries.

× Moreover, it open up opportunities for me to travel and work in international companies around the world in the future.

✓ Moreover, it opens up opportunities for me to travel and work for international companies around the world in the future.

The verb 'open' should be in third person singular 'opens' to agree with 'it'. Also, the preposition 'work in international companies' is less common; 'work for international companies' is more appropriate when referring to employment.