地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有些句子结构混乱，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: I'm not very fond of geography because I didn't choose it in high school. However, I find it interesting because it helps us understand more about our planet.

建议: 回答内容重复，表达不够流畅，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并避免重复使用相同词汇。

示例: Absolutely. I enjoy traveling, and geography provides useful information. For instance, when I visit other countries, I often buy books about local geography to learn more about the area.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

示例: No, I never studied geography because it was an optional subject in my country, and I found it difficult, so I chose not to take it in high school.

建议: 表达中存在语法和用词错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免口语化表达。

示例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at the subject. If I become a teacher, I would prefer to teach Chinese since I am more skilled in it.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇，句子结构不够流畅，建议使用连接词并丰富细节，使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries because I dream of traveling worldwide. For example, I am interested in learning about beautiful mountains and their locations.

× When I was a high school student, I even didn't choose this subject.

✓ When I was a high school student, I didn't even choose this subject.

副词even的位置错误，应该放在助动词did后面，构成正确的否定结构。

× But I really have some interest about it because I think it is amazing subject which can learn, which can help us learn something about our earth.

✓ But I really have some interest in it because I think it is an amazing subject which we can learn from, which can help us learn something about our earth.

动词have搭配介词是have interest in，而不是about；缺少冠词an；句子中缺少主语we；动词learn后应加介词from。

× I really don't have flare for geography.

✓ I really don't have a flair for geography.

名词flair前需要冠词a，表示“一种天赋”。

× The geography always can give me some useful information when I'm traveling.

✓ Geography can always give me some useful information when I'm traveling.

geography作为学科名词，不需要the；副词always位置应靠近动词can。

× For example, when I travel to other countries, I always buy some books about the local geographer knowledge.

✓ For example, when I travel to other countries, I always buy some books about the local geographical knowledge.

geographer是名词，表示地理学家，应该用形容词geographical修饰knowledge。

× Absolutely not in my country and geography is an optional 'cause when I was a high school student I didn't choose this subject because it is.

✓ Absolutely not in my country and geography is optional because when I was a high school student I didn't choose this subject because it was hard.

句子中'cause'应改为because；时态应保持一致，描述过去时用was；句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× It was very hard for me to learn.

✓ It was very hard for me to learn.

该句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Plus if I want to be a teacher I maybe want to be a Chinese teacher because I'm a pro at it.

✓ Plus, if I want to be a teacher, I might want to be a Chinese teacher because I'm good at it.

maybe用作副词，不能直接修饰want，应该用情态动词might；pro用法不当，改为good。

× I have a dream of traveling all over the world, so I I often learn some geography knowledge about other countries.

✓ I have a dream of traveling all over the world, so I often learn some geographical knowledge about other countries.

knowledge前应加形容词geographical修饰；重复的I应删除。

× For example, I'd like to learn some geography knowledge about the beautiful mountains.

✓ For example, I'd like to learn some geographical knowledge about the beautiful mountains.

knowledge前应加形容词geographical修饰。