花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'eyes love' instead of 'I love' and 'there's amazing fragrances' instead of 'they have amazing fragrances'. Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I love flowers very much. I'm especially attracted to their vibrant colors and wonderful fragrances. I enjoy planting flowers on my balcony so I can see them every morning. This helps me start the day with a positive attitude.

建议: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'gatherings' and 'blown us wide range of flowers' which affect clarity. Also, 'nudging them heavily' is confusing. Focus on using clear and relevant vocabulary, and structure your answer logically with linking words to explain your points.

示例: Yes, my parents love flowers and are very good at planting them. They have a wide variety of flowers in their garden and take great care of them. It is rewarding to see the flowers bloom beautifully because of their efforts.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains awkward expressions like 'fresh sense of blooming flowers' and 'enabled me to kiss Saturday' which are confusing. Use more natural phrases and avoid unclear idioms. Also, try to add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, there are many flowers in my community. Every morning when I walk outside, I can smell the fresh scent of blooming flowers along the path. This helps me start my day feeling positive and refreshed.

建议: Your answer has some repetition ('pink delicate pink petals') and grammatical errors ('this beautiful memories'). Also, the last sentence is unclear. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions, and organize your answer with linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers, especially cherry blossoms. I am captivated by their delicate pink petals. I like to share these photos on my WeChat Moments to keep beautiful memories, as looking at them always brings me joy.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as 'should like to skip flowers' and incomplete sentences. Focus on answering directly with clear and complete sentences. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to explain cultural practices clearly.

示例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to show love and appreciation. It is a traditional way to strengthen relationships. In Chinese culture, flowers symbolize respect and good wishes, especially on special occasions like weddings and festivals.

× Yes, eyes love flowers very much.

✓ Yes, I love flowers very much.

The pronoun 'eyes' is incorrect here; the correct subject pronoun is 'I' to refer to oneself.

× there's amazing fragrances.

✓ there are amazing fragrances.

'Fragrances' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'amazing' correctly modifies the plural noun 'fragrances'.

× I also enjoys planting flowers at home on my balcony so that I can see them every morning.

✓ I also enjoy planting flowers at home on my balcony so that I can see them every morning.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb 'enjoy' without the 's' ending.

× Nudging them heavily is a rewarding to see the flowers blooming beautifully.

✓ Nurturing them carefully is rewarding to see the flowers blooming beautifully.

The word 'nudging' is incorrect in this context; likely intended word is 'nurturing'. Also, 'a rewarding' should be 'rewarding' without 'a' as it is an adjective here.

× they have blown us wide range of flowers in their garden.

✓ they have shown us a wide range of flowers in their garden.

The verb 'blown' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'shown'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'wide range'.

× I'm so captivated by its pink delicate pink petals and I would like to share these photos on my WeChat Moments to keep this beautiful memories seeing these photos can always bring us.

✓ I'm so captivated by their delicate pink petals and I would like to share these photos on my WeChat Moments to keep these beautiful memories; seeing these photos can always bring us joy.

'Its' should be 'their' to agree with plural 'petals'. 'Delicate pink' is the correct adjective order. 'This beautiful memories' should be 'these beautiful memories' to match plural. The sentence is run-on and needs punctuation and clarity.

× if people should like to skip flowers in my countries because it's a traditional ways to show love and appreciation as well as strengthens relationship.

✓ if people like to send flowers in my country because it's a traditional way to show love and appreciation as well as strengthen relationships.

'Skip flowers' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'send flowers'. 'Countries' should be singular 'country'. 'Ways' should be singular 'way' to match 'a traditional way'. 'Strengthens' should be 'strengthen' to agree with plural 'relationships'.