花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. "move phrase" wa imi ga wakarimasen. Motto seikaku ni, junsui na eigo de kotaete kudasai. Mata, 5 bun ni osae, fukusetsu no jisho wa rikai shiyasui you ni shite kudasai.

示例: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and brighten up any place. I often give flowers as presents to my girlfriend and close friends to show my affection.

建议: Kotae no bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa ga fuman desu. "Ask my sister to love Flower very much" wa imi ga wakarimasen. Shitsumon ni chokusetsu kotaete, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: My sister loves flowers very much, especially sunflowers. She often puts them in her room and enjoys their scent. She always smiles happily when I give her sunflowers as gifts.

建议: Eigo no bunpou to hyougen ga fuman desu. "which suits its male" wa imi ga fumei desu. Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: Yes, there are many flowers of different colors and types in the garden in front of my house. I especially like roses and sunflowers, and we often keep them as gifts.

建议: Kotae ga fuman de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. "I like to give wallpaper of photos on my phone or in" wa fumei desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui eigo de kotaete kudasai.

示例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I am not fond of photography. However, I like to use flower photos as wallpapers on my phone.

建议: Bunpou to hyougen ga fuman de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. "worshiped by using it to guard" ya "bring lots of flour" wa machigai desu. Seikaku na eigo de, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: No, people in my country don't often send flowers to others. Instead, flowers are commonly used in religious ceremonies and offered to gods in temples.

× They are pretty and they make my move phrase.

✓ They are pretty and they make me move pleasantly.

The phrase 'make my move phrase' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'make me move pleasantly' or 'make me feel happy'. The verb 'make' should be followed by the object 'me' and then the base verb or an adjective. Here, 'move' is used as a verb and 'pleasantly' as an adverb to describe the manner.

× It's very pleasant to see them in front of anything.

✓ It's very pleasant to see them in front of everything.

The phrase 'in front of anything' is incorrect because 'anything' is too vague and uncountable in this context. The correct phrase is 'in front of everything' to indicate all things or surroundings. Also, 'in front of' is the correct preposition to indicate position.

× I like to give them as a present to my favorite persons like my girlfriend or.

✓ I like to give them as presents to my favorite people like my girlfriend.

The word 'persons' is less common and sounds unnatural here; 'people' is preferred. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'or.' which is incomplete. The corrected sentence removes 'or' and uses 'presents' as plural to match 'them'.

× Ask my sister to love Flower very much.

✓ My sister loves flowers very much.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Ask my sister to love Flower very much' is incorrect. The correct sentence is 'My sister loves flowers very much.' Also, 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× She like uh, Sunflower is one of the favorite one.

✓ She likes sunflowers; sunflowers are one of her favorites.

The verb 'like' must agree with the third person singular subject 'She' as 'likes'. Also, 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' to match 'one of the favorite ones'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× She used to put it in your in her room around the street.

✓ She used to put them in her room near the street.

The phrase 'in your in her room around the street' is incorrect and confusing. The correct prepositions are 'in her room' and 'near the street' to indicate location. Also, 'it' should be 'them' referring to sunflowers.

× She like to smell it.

✓ She likes to smell them.

The verb 'like' must be 'likes' for third person singular 'She'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' referring to plural 'sunflowers'.

× She laughs when I give Sunflower as a present to her.

✓ She laughs when I give sunflowers as a present to her.

The verb 'laughs' is correct for third person singular. However, 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' to match the context of giving flowers as a present.

× Yes, there are lots of flower of different color and kind which suits its male just in front of my house in the garden.

✓ Yes, there are lots of flowers of different colors and kinds which suit the male just in front of my house in the garden.

'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'lots of'. 'color' and 'kind' should be plural 'colors' and 'kinds'. The verb 'suits' should be 'suit' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'. The phrase 'its male' is unclear but kept as is due to lack of context.

× Among them, I like rose and sunflower and we used to keep them as present.

✓ Among them, I like roses and sunflowers and we used to keep them as presents.

'rose' and 'sunflower' should be plural 'roses' and 'sunflowers' to match 'them'. 'present' should be plural 'presents' to match 'them'.

× No, I am not fond of taking photos.

✓ No, I am not fond of taking photos.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context. No correction needed.

× So even I love flower.

✓ So even though I love flowers.

The phrase 'So even I love flower' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'So even though I love flowers' to express contrast. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× I do not capture the photos on my phone but I like to give wallpaper of photos on my phone or in.

✓ I do not capture photos on my phone but I like to use photos as wallpaper on my phone or elsewhere.

The phrase 'give wallpaper of photos' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'use photos as wallpaper'. Also, 'or in' is incomplete and replaced with 'or elsewhere' for clarity.

× No, there is no such concern of sending flowers to others in our country.

✓ No, there is no such custom of sending flowers to others in our country.

The phrase 'concern of sending flowers' is unnatural. The correct phrase is 'custom of sending flowers'. The 'there is' structure is correct.

× But people often worshiped by using it to guard and they pray and they tend to bring lots of flour.

✓ But people often worship by using it to guard, and they pray and tend to bring lots of flowers.

The verb 'worshiped' should be present tense 'worship' to match 'often'. 'flour' is a misspelling of 'flowers'. The sentence is corrected for tense and spelling.

× It's it's offered to the God in the temple.

✓ It's offered to God in the temple.

The phrase 'It's it's' is a repetition error. Also, 'the God' should be 'God' without the definite article 'the'.