花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“police”应为“place”或“park”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并注意时态和主谓一致。

示例: Yes, I really love flowers. Whenever I pass by a flower shop or a park, they catch my eye and make me feel relaxed.

建议: 回答中有词汇错误，如“blends”应为“plants”，“connection”用词不当，且句子不连贯。建议使用正确词汇，句子结构清晰，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, my mom is a big fan of flowers. She plants various kinds on our balcony, such as Chinese roses and jasmine. She says that growing these flowers makes the place more lively and improves her mood.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“Weather is on our balcony”不合适，且重复提及“roses”。建议简洁明了地描述花的种类和环境，避免重复。

示例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. On my balcony and around the community, you can see roses, cherry blossoms, and other beautiful flowers that make the area peaceful.

建议: 回答开头“Deaf India is every time”不合适，语法错误较多。建议使用简单句表达习惯，注意时态和句子结构。

示例: Yes, whenever I see beautiful flowers like cherry blossoms in spring or sunflowers in summer, I usually take photos. Sometimes I share them on social media, and sometimes I keep them for myself.

建议: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，如“buses the 19 days”和“Connection”用词不当，句子不完整。建议使用正确表达，补充具体场合，句子完整。

示例: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions, such as birthdays or when someone is in the hospital. Sending flowers on Mother's Day is very common and is a great way for children to show their love.

× ...it usually catch my eye and make me feel more relaxed.

✓ ...it usually catches my eye and makes me feel more relaxed.

主语是单数it，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，catch应改为catches，make应改为makes。

× She blends all kinds of flowers on our balcony at home...

✓ She plants all kinds of flowers on our balcony at home...

动词blend意为混合，不适用于种植花卉，正确动词应为plant，表示种植。

× ...like Chinese roses, Jasmine and connection.

✓ ...like Chinese roses, jasmine and carnations.

connection不是花的名称，可能是carnation（康乃馨）的误写，且花名应小写。

× She says growing these friends made the whole place more alive and put in her, put her in her better mood.

✓ She says growing these flowers makes the whole place more alive and puts her in a better mood.

friends应为flowers，动词时态应与主语一致，made改为makes，put改为puts，表达更准确。

× Weather is on our balcony at my home or in our community.

✓ Whether on our balcony at my home or in our community,

Weather应为Whether，表示“无论”，是连词，原句拼写错误。

× You can a lot of roses, cherries blooms and the beautiful roses which made the whole place alive and more peaceful.

✓ You can see a lot of roses, cherry blossoms and beautiful flowers which make the whole place alive and more peaceful.

cherries blooms应为cherry blossoms，复数名词形式错误；动词made应为make，与主语flowers保持一致。

× Deaf India is every time I look at beautiful flowers like cherry blossom in spring or sunflowers in summer, I usually take a quick photo.

✓ Definitely, every time I look at beautiful flowers like cherry blossoms in spring or sunflowers in summer, I usually take a quick photo.

Deaf India无意义，可能是Definitely的误写，句子结构混乱，需调整。

× They usually send flowers on buses the 19 days or some when someone is in the hospital for example.

✓ They usually send flowers on birthdays or sometimes when someone is in the hospital, for example.

buses the 19 days无意义，应为birthdays，且some应为sometimes，表达更准确。

× Connection is very common on Mother's Day, which is great way for children to express their.

✓ Carnations are very common on Mother's Day, which is a great way for children to express their feelings.

Connection应为Carnations，且句子不完整，需补充feelings，表达完整。