花— Part 1 评分报告

× Yes, I like flowers because flowers make flowers make me happy they have. Good smell and very colorful so it makes me peaceful.

✓ Yes, I like flowers because they make me happy. They have a good smell and are very colorful, so they make me feel peaceful.

The original sentence has repetition and incorrect sentence structure, making it confusing. The phrase 'flowers make flowers make me happy they have' is redundant and unclear. The correction separates ideas into clear sentences and uses appropriate conjunctions and verb forms for clarity.

× My mom really loves flowers because she is good at planting and she like to grow some flowers.

✓ My mom really loves flowers because she is good at planting and she likes to grow some flowers.

The verb 'like' should be in the third person singular form 'likes' to agree with the subject 'she'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in the present tense.

× Yes umm, near my house there are lots of mountains and in spring everyone visit here because flower garden is beautiful.

✓ Yes, umm, near my house there are lots of mountains, and in spring everyone visits here because the flower garden is beautiful.

The verb 'visit' should be 'visits' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. Also, 'flower garden' needs the definite article 'the' to specify a particular garden. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yeah, sometime. Umm, honestly, I like take puddles, but nowadays I'm busy for the IELTS exam so I think I sometimes take photos of flowers. Not many times.

✓ Yeah, sometimes. Umm, honestly, I like taking puddles, but nowadays I'm busy preparing for the IELTS exam, so I think I sometimes take photos of flowers, but not many times.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Busy for' should be 'busy preparing for' to correctly express the activity. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Hmm yes if someone opened new store. People give flowers and little trees because it means less, so lot of people send flowers to others.

✓ Hmm, yes, if someone opens a new store, people give flowers and small trees because it means luck, so a lot of people send flowers to others.

'Opened' should be 'opens' to match the present tense context. 'New store' needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'Little trees' is better expressed as 'small trees'. The phrase 'it means less' is likely a mistake for 'it means luck'. 'Lot of people' requires the article 'a' to become 'a lot of people'.