花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và có cấu trúc hơn.

示例: Yes, I love flowers. I am a big fan of them because they help me relax and their beauty is very calming. I especially like red roses because of their vibrant color and pleasant smell.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Cố gắng cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: Yes, I do. My mom really loves flowers because she always takes care of them. My dad buys her a bunch of roses every Valentine's Day, and she says that flowers help her feel relaxed and calm.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần được tổ chức tốt hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và cảm xúc của bạn.

示例: No, there are not many flowers in the town where I live because the climate is not suitable for flowers to survive. I feel a bit sad about this, and I hope that in the future, my children will plant more flowers.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết và nói lắp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it's more common for girls. However, I do take pictures of flowers on special occasions like Valentine's Day or my mom's birthday.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Cố gắng cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về truyền thống này.

示例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other as a way to express love and affection. I think it is a beautiful tradition that brings people closer.

× I love I'm big fan of flower cause flower make me relax and come cause their beauty.

✓ I love flowers. I'm a big fan of flowers because flowers make me relax and calm because of their beauty.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when talking generally. Also, 'I'm big fan' needs an article 'a' before 'big fan'. 'Cause' should be 'because' for clarity. 'Make me relax and come' should be 'make me relax and calm'. 'Their' refers to plural 'flowers', so the plural form is correct here.

× I really like rose cut the red red color of that of them and also the smell.

✓ I really like roses, especially the red color of them and also their smell.

'Rose' should be plural 'roses' when talking generally. The phrase 'cut the red red color of that of them' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'especially the red color of them'. 'Their smell' refers to plural 'roses'.

× I know my mom is a person who really love flowers 'cause she's always one.

✓ I know my mom is a person who really loves flowers because she's always one.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'who' referring to 'my mom'. 'Cause' is better written as 'because' for clarity.

× My dad buy her a bunch of roll each Valentine and he said she said that a flower flower make her relax and calm.

✓ My dad buys her a bunch of roses each Valentine and he said she said that flowers make her relax and calm.

'Buy' should be 'buys' for third person singular present tense (see next correction). 'Roll' is likely a mishearing of 'rose' or 'roses'. 'Flower flower' is redundant; corrected to 'flowers'. 'Make' should be 'make' because 'flowers' is plural. The tense 'he said she said' is acceptable as past tense reporting.

× My dad buy her a bunch of roll each Valentine and he said she said that a flower flower make her relax and calm.

✓ My dad buys her a bunch of roses each Valentine and he said she said that flowers make her relax and calm.

'Buy' should be 'buys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'My dad'.

× No, there are, there are not too much flower in the town I live cause the atmosphere in here is not suitable With not suitable to flower can survive.

✓ No, there are not too many flowers in the town I live in because the atmosphere here is not suitable for flowers to survive.

'Too much flower' should be 'too many flowers' because 'flowers' is countable and plural. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'With not suitable to flower can survive' is incorrect; corrected to 'not suitable for flowers to survive'. Added 'in' after 'live' for correct preposition.

× I feel pretty bad about that and I hope that my child would bring more.

✓ I feel pretty bad about that and I hope that my child will bring more.

'Would bring' is conditional; 'will bring' is more appropriate for expressing hope about the future.

× No, I don't. I feel like it's for the girl, uh, instead of taking photo, uh, of flower in my daylight, I just take, I just uh, take photo of them in some special occasion like Valentine or my mom birthday.

✓ No, I don't. I feel like it's for girls. Instead of taking photos of flowers in my daily life, I just take photos of them on special occasions like Valentine's Day or my mom's birthday.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when talking generally. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Daylight' is incorrect; 'daily life' is correct. 'Some special occasion' should be 'special occasions'. Added possessive 'my mom's birthday'. 'Valentine' should be 'Valentine's Day'.

× Yes, my every citizen in my country O often send flowers to each other 'cause that is the way they give the love or give love to each other and I feel that it's a good traditional.

✓ Yes, every citizen in my country often sends flowers to each other because that is the way they give love to each other and I feel that it's a good tradition.

'My every citizen' is incorrect; 'every citizen' is correct. 'O' is likely a typo and removed. 'Send' should be 'sends' to agree with singular 'every citizen'. 'Give the love or give love' simplified to 'give love'. 'Traditional' is an adjective; 'tradition' is the correct noun here.