花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'I love flowers because they are beautiful and fragrant, but I don't like maintaining them.'

示例: I love flowers because they are beautiful and bring a pleasant fragrance to my home. However, I don't enjoy taking care of them since it requires a lot of effort.

建议: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, one of my friends loves flowers. She often buys them when she goes out and is very good at taking care of them.'

示例: Yes, one of my friends loves flowers. She often buys a bouquet when she goes out, and she is very skilled at taking care of them.

建议: Provide a clear and complete answer with specific details. Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I don't have many flowers at home because I am not good at taking care of them. However, the city has many flowers, including a special kind called...'.

示例: I don't have many flowers at home because I am not good at taking care of them. However, the city where I live has many flowers, including a special type called the lotus.

建议: Answer directly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain exceptions. For example, say 'I don't usually take photos of flowers, but if I see a rare or very beautiful flower, I might take a picture.'

示例: I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life. However, if I see a rare or particularly beautiful flower, I might take a photo to capture the moment.

建议: Provide a clear and complete answer with specific cultural context. Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words. For example, say 'People in my country don't often send flowers because they are delicate and require careful handling.'

示例: People in my country don't often send flowers as gifts because flowers are delicate and need careful care, which makes them less popular as presents.

× Uh, it's hard to say because to my mind I love flower because they are so beautiful and, uh, it will bring some of nice flavor, but in other way I don't like flower because, uh, I can to maintain there and if someone give me a flower.

✓ Uh, it's hard to say because to my mind I love flowers because they are so beautiful and, uh, they will bring some nice fragrance, but in another way I don't like flowers because, uh, I can't maintain them and if someone gives me a flower.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when referring to flowers in general. Also, 'it will bring some of nice flavor' is incorrect; 'they will bring some nice fragrance' is more appropriate. 'I can to maintain there' is incorrect; it should be 'I can't maintain them'. 'If someone give me' should be 'if someone gives me' to agree with the singular subject.

× Uh, it's hard to say because to my mind I love flower because they are so beautiful and, uh, it will bring some of nice flavor, but in other way I don't like flower because, uh, I can to maintain there and if someone give me a flower.

✓ Uh, it's hard to say because to my mind I love flowers because they are so beautiful and, uh, they will bring some nice fragrance, but in another way I don't like flowers because, uh, I can't maintain them and if someone gives me a flower.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'someone' in the third person singular form.

× Yes, one of my friend, she was observes with flour and she always, uh, buy a branch of flower when she go out like the and she is, uh, she was very good at taking care of flowers. I appreciate.

✓ Yes, one of my friends, she is obsessed with flowers and she always, uh, buys a branch of flowers when she goes out and she is, uh, very good at taking care of flowers. I appreciate that.

'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. 'She was observes' is incorrect; it should be 'she is obsessed'. 'Flour' is a different word; it should be 'flowers'. 'Buy' should be 'buys' to agree with 'she'. 'When she go out' should be 'when she goes out'. 'A branch of flower' should be 'a branch of flowers' or 'a branch of flower' can be 'a branch of flowers' depending on context.

× Now where I live at my home, I don't have a lot of flower to decorate it because I am doesn't good at to take care of them. But the city where I live was a lot of flower and there are something a very special flower called uh.

✓ Now where I live at my home, I don't have a lot of flowers to decorate it because I am not good at taking care of them. But the city where I live has a lot of flowers and there is a very special flower called uh.

'A lot of flower' should be 'a lot of flowers' (plural). 'I am doesn't good at to take care of them' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not good at taking care of them'. 'The city where I live was a lot of flower' should be 'the city where I live has a lot of flowers'. 'There are something a very special flower' should be 'there is a very special flower'.

× Now where I live at my home, I don't have a lot of flower to decorate it because I am doesn't good at to take care of them. But the city where I live was a lot of flower and there are something a very special flower called uh.

✓ Now where I live at my home, I don't have a lot of flowers to decorate it because I am not good at taking care of them. But the city where I live has a lot of flowers and there is a very special flower called uh.

After 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'to take care' should be 'taking care'.

× Umm, I don't, uh, take a photo to flower of flowers in my daily life because, uh, actually I don't so fantastic with flower. But in some case, for example, if the flower was very rare or the, uh, flower was just so pretty or the mood.

✓ Umm, I don't, uh, take photos of flowers in my daily life because, uh, actually I am not so fantastic with flowers. But in some cases, for example, if the flower is very rare or the, uh, flower is just so pretty or the mood.

'Take a photo to flower of flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'take photos of flowers'. 'I don't so fantastic with flower' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not so fantastic with flowers'. 'In some case' should be 'in some cases'. 'If the flower was' should be 'if the flower is' to match present tense context.

× Umm, I don't, uh, take a photo to flower of flowers in my daily life because, uh, actually I don't so fantastic with flower. But in some case, for example, if the flower was very rare or the, uh, flower was just so pretty or the mood.

✓ Umm, I don't, uh, take photos of flowers in my daily life because, uh, actually I am not so fantastic with flowers. But in some cases, for example, if the flower is very rare or the, uh, flower is just so pretty or the mood.

The use of 'was' is past tense but the context suggests present or general condition, so 'is' is more appropriate.

× Umm, I don't think so because, uh, in my country, if you want to give flower as a gift to someone, uh, it's, you should have to very carefully because always the flower are very vulnerable and, uh, you have to take care of them. And if someone wasn't, look at the.

✓ Umm, I don't think so because, uh, in my country, if you want to give flowers as a gift to someone, uh, you should be very careful because flowers are very vulnerable and, uh, you have to take care of them. And if someone doesn't look at them...

'Give flower' should be 'give flowers' (plural). 'You should have to very carefully' is incorrect; it should be 'you should be very careful'. 'The flower are' should be 'flowers are'. 'If someone wasn't, look at the' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'if someone doesn't look at them'.

× Umm, I don't think so because, uh, in my country, if you want to give flower as a gift to someone, uh, it's, you should have to very carefully because always the flower are very vulnerable and, uh, you have to take care of them.

✓ Umm, I don't think so because, uh, in my country, if you want to give flowers as a gift to someone, uh, you should be very careful because flowers are very vulnerable and, uh, you have to take care of them.

'You should have to very carefully' is incorrect modal verb usage; it should be 'you should be very careful'.