花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure for naturalness. For example, say "bright colors always make me feel happy" instead of "there are bright colors always make me feel happy." Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I love flowers because their bright colors always make me feel happy. For instance, seeing colourful flowers in a garden instantly brightens my mood.

建议: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, e.g., "My mother loves flowers." Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas more naturally.

示例: Absolutely. My mother loves flowers and has created a beautiful garden by herself because she finds gardening relaxing and rewarding. Thanks to her, I have also developed an interest in planting, which I find fascinating.

建议: Good answer but improve coherence by using linking words like "for example" or "in addition." Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like "make an environment" should be "make the environment."

示例: Since I live in a rural area, there are many flowers in my garden, such as roses and hibiscus. I enjoy having them around because they make the environment more colourful and refreshing. In addition, the climate here is perfect for growing various flowers throughout the year.

建议: Improve grammar and word choice, e.g., "photos of flowers" (plural), and "I use them as wallpaper on my phone screen." Also, avoid redundancy and make sentences concise.

示例: Absolutely, I love taking photos of flowers daily. I usually keep photos of roses and tulips in my gallery because I use them as wallpapers on my phone.

建议: Work on grammar and clarity. For example, say "we rarely send flowers to people" and "flowers are mainly used for gardening in Malaysia." Also, avoid repetition like "to to."

示例: As a Malaysian, we rarely send flowers to people because we usually give food or special items to friends. Flowers are mainly used for gardening in Malaysia.

× Yes, I do love flowers because there are bright colors always make me feel happy.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers because bright colors always make me feel happy.

The phrase 'there are bright colors always make me feel happy' is incorrect because 'there are' is unnecessary before 'bright colors' in this context. The sentence should directly state that bright colors make the speaker feel happy. This corrects the 'There be issue' by removing the incorrect use of 'there are'.

× For example, when I see the colourful flowers in a garden it instantly bright up my mood or my day.

✓ For example, when I see the colourful flowers in a garden, it instantly brightens up my mood or my day.

The verb 'bright up' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'brighten up'. Also, 'it' refers to 'seeing the flowers', which is singular, so the verb should be 'brightens'. This fixes the verb form and subject-verb agreement.

× My mother love flower and has created a beautiful garden by herself.

✓ My mother loves flowers and has created a beautiful garden by herself.

The subject 'My mother' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' not 'love'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple types or instances. This corrects subject-verb agreement and singular/plural usage.

× My mother love flower and has created a beautiful garden by herself.

✓ My mother loves flowers and has created a beautiful garden by herself.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers in the garden. This corrects the singular and plural issue.

× Thanks to her I also have developed an interest in planting which I think it is a fascinating hobby.

✓ Thanks to her, I have also developed an interest in planting, which I think is a fascinating hobby.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'which I think'. The clause should be 'which I think is a fascinating hobby'. Also, the placement of 'also' is better before 'have'. This corrects the incorrect use of pronouns and improves sentence structure.

× I really enjoy having them around because they make an environment more colourful and refreshing.

✓ I really enjoy having them around because they make the environment more colourful and refreshing.

The phrase 'an environment' is incorrect here because it refers to a specific environment (the surroundings where the speaker lives). The definite article 'the' should be used instead of 'an'.

× Absolutely, I love taking photos of flower in my daily life.

✓ Absolutely, I love taking photos of flowers in my daily life.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the speaker refers to multiple flowers in general. This corrects the singular and plural issue.

× I usually keep a photo of roses and tulips in my photo gallery because I will make them as a wallpaper in my screen phone.

✓ I usually keep photos of roses and tulips in my photo gallery because I use them as wallpaper on my phone screen.

The use of 'will make' is incorrect here because the action is habitual or current, not future. Also, 'make them as a wallpaper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'use them as wallpaper'. 'Screen phone' should be 'phone screen'. This corrects future tense misuse and phrase usage.

× Flowers is specifically used for gardening in Malaysia.

✓ Flowers are specifically used for gardening in Malaysia.

The subject 'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. This corrects the singular and plural issue.

× As a Malaysian, we rarely use flowers to to send to people because we tend to use other things such as food or special items to send it to our friends.

✓ As Malaysians, we rarely use flowers to send to people because we tend to use other things such as food or special items to send to our friends.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because the object is plural or general. Also, 'As a Malaysian' should be plural 'As Malaysians' to match 'we'. This corrects pronoun misuse and subject consistency.

× As a Malaysian, we rarely use flowers to to send to people because we tend to use other things such as food or special items to send it to our friends.

✓ As Malaysians, we rarely use flowers to send to people because we tend to use other things such as food or special items to send to our friends.

The phrase 'to to send to people' has a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. Also, 'send it to our friends' should be 'send to our friends' without 'it'. This corrects preposition misuse and redundancy.