花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“flowers have have good smiles”不符合英语习惯，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。

示例: Yes, I love flowers because they look beautiful and can express feelings without words.

建议: 回答中有多处用词错误和语法问题，如“blithe buys fish flowers”不合适，建议使用正确的词汇和句式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: My mother is a big fan of flowers. She buys fresh flowers three or four times a week to decorate her bedroom because they make her feel happy.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免不必要的重复和错误。

示例: Yes, there are many flowers near where I live. My mother grows some of them, and I water them three or four times a week to keep them healthy.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“flowers have pretties well appearance”，建议使用更自然的表达，并注意时态的一致性。

示例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they look beautiful and it makes me happy. For example, after my classes, I like to take pictures of flowers nearby.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“many peoples”、“grateful World Special's emotion”，建议使用正确的词汇和表达方式，句子应更简洁明了。

示例: Yes, during festivals like Teacher's Day or Mother's Day, many people send flowers to teachers or parents to show their gratitude.

× Yes, because flowers have have good smiles and pretty appearance and also flowers contain spacious meanings which can deliver my expressions indirectly.

✓ Yes, because flowers have good smells and pretty appearances and also flowers contain spacious meanings which can deliver my expressions indirectly.

这里“smiles”应为“smells”，且“appearance”应使用复数形式“appearances”，因为指的是多朵花的多个外观特征。

× My mom's is a big fan of flowers.

✓ My mom is a big fan of flowers.

“My mom's”是所有格，句中应使用主格“My mom”。

× She often blithe buys fish flowers 3 or 4 times a week to decorate her bedrooms because she thinks they are really fresh and pretty which will make her feel happy.

✓ She often happily buys fresh flowers 3 or 4 times a week to decorate her bedroom because she thinks they are really fresh and pretty which makes her feel happy.

“blithe”用错，应为副词“happily”；“fish flowers”应为“fresh flowers”；“bedrooms”应为单数“bedroom”；“which will make”改为“which makes”更自然。

× Yes, there were a lot of flowers near my living places.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers near where I live.

“living places”不自然，改为“where I live”更符合表达；时态应与问题一致，使用现在时“are”。

× Some is grown by my mother's and some warm nature, my wounds often watering dense, uh, three or four times a week to make them fresh and growing well.

✓ Some are grown by my mother and some in the warm nature. I often water them three or four times a week to keep them fresh and growing well.

“Some is”应为“Some are”；“my mother's”应为“my mother”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整语序；“my wounds”应为“I often”或“I water”；“watering dense”不正确，改为“water them”。

× Yes, because flowers have pretties well appearance and take pictures of them will make me feel happy.

✓ Yes, because flowers have pretty appearances and taking pictures of them makes me feel happy.

“pretties well appearance”错误，应为“pretty appearances”；“take pictures of them will make”应改为动名词结构“taking pictures of them makes”。

× For example when I was finishing my classes I will take some photos about the flowers.

✓ For example, when I finish my classes I take some photos of the flowers.

时态不一致，“was finishing”改为一般现在时“finish”，与“will take”改为“一般现在时”保持一致；“photos about”应为“photos of”。

× Yes, many peoples in South Pacific festivals like Teacher's Days or Mother's Days will send flowers to the teachers or the parents to show their grateful World Special's emotion to them.

✓ Yes, many people in South Pacific festivals like Teacher's Day or Mother's Day send flowers to teachers or parents to show their gratitude and special emotions to them.

“peoples”应为“people”；节日名称应为单数形式“Teacher's Day”；“the teachers or the parents”改为复数“teachers or parents”；“grateful World Special's emotion”表达不清，改为“gratitude and special emotions”。