花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时句子结构不完整，存在断句问题，且表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I love flowers. I often visit the city center park near my home to see the blooming flowers in spring, and I am also attracted by the unique colorful flowers in winter and autumn.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“send”应为“sends”，“detailedly”用词不当。建议注意动词时态和副词使用，表达更准确。

示例: My roommate loves flowers very much. He always buys different species of flowers and sends them to his girlfriend. He carefully selects them to ensure they are of the best quality.

建议: 回答中句子不够连贯，部分表达不完整。建议合并句子，使用连接词，并丰富细节使内容更具体。

示例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because the city government plants plenty of them in the community. Moreover, the university nearby selects different species of flowers for every season to beautify the environment.

建议: 表达中存在语法和用词错误，如“picture”用法不当，句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达和正确的词汇。

示例: Although I'm not good at photography, I still like to take pictures of beautiful flowers when I travel to other cities because flowers are a unique part of our daily scenery.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和连贯性。

示例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, my roommate sends romantic flowers to his girlfriend to express his love. Also, we often give flowers to show our gratitude.

× Besides those flowers with colorful petals. Always attract my eyesight in winter and autumn because they are unique.

✓ Besides, those flowers with colorful petals always attract my eyesight in winter and autumn because they are unique.

原句中“Besides those flowers with colorful petals.”是一个不完整的句子，缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构错误。应将其与后句合并，形成完整句子。

× He will select them detailedly to ensure those flowers are maintaining their best quality.

✓ He will select them carefully to ensure those flowers maintain their best quality.

“detailedly”不是正确的副词形式，应使用“carefully”。“are maintaining”时态不当，保持状态用一般现在时“maintain”。

× Also the university selects different species of flowers in all seasons to make the environment.

✓ Also, the university selects different species of flowers in all seasons to beautify the environment.

“make the environment”表达不准确，应使用“beautify the environment”表示美化环境。

× Although I'm not good at taking photos, I still choose to picture some beautiful flowers while traveling other beautiful cities because flowers are the unique scenery which live near our lives.

✓ Although I'm not good at taking photos, I still choose to photograph some beautiful flowers while traveling to other beautiful cities because flowers are unique scenery that lives near our lives.

“choose to picture”用词不当，应为“choose to photograph”。“traveling other beautiful cities”缺少介词“to”。“which live”主语为单数“scenery”，应为“that lives”。

× Yes, for example, one my roommate want to express his love to his girlfriend, he always select the those flowers that represent the meaning of romance.

✓ Yes, for example, when my roommate wants to express his love to his girlfriend, he always selects those flowers that represent the meaning of romance.

“one my roommate”错误，应为“my roommate”。“want”应为第三人称单数“wants”。“select”应为“selects”。去掉多余的“the”。

× And we what's more, we often send a bunch of flowers to others when we want to express our gratitude.

✓ What's more, we often send a bunch of flowers to others when we want to express our gratitude.

句首不应以“and”开头，且“we what's more”结构错误，应直接用“What's more”引出句子。