写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的句式。

示例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me organize my thoughts clearly. When I study or conduct research, I write down my ideas to ensure I understand them well.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，缺乏逻辑性。建议简化句子，明确表达写作内容和原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: I like to write notes related to my software research because I cannot see the physical products. Writing helps me visualize concepts and remember important points.

建议: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用正确时态和连词，清晰表达观点。

示例: Yes, as technology advances rapidly, our lives and writing habits change. Nowadays, I rarely write; mostly, I write to clear my thoughts, whereas before, I often took notes.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议理清句子结构，使用正确的介词和表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

示例: It depends on the purpose. If I want to clear my mind or do calculations, I prefer handwriting. But for work or journal papers, typing is faster and more convenient.

× Yes, because I think writing can help me organize my mind and my thought clearly.

✓ Yes, because I think writing can help me organize my mind and my thoughts clearly.

thought 应该用复数形式 thoughts，因为这里指的是多种想法。

× So when I was study or thinking something for my research I will write it down to make sure I am clear about my thoughts.

✓ So when I was studying or thinking about something for my research, I would write it down to make sure I was clear about my thoughts.

was study 应该用进行时 studying；thinking 后面需要加介词 about；时态要保持一致，过去时用 would 和 was。

× A little rise above what I sold for my research because my research is for software and I cannot see the real physical items or through the writing I can see in a visual and also I will write the important points in my study to help me understanding and remember.

✓ A little rise above what I sold for my research because my research is for software and I cannot see the real physical items, but through writing I can see it visually, and also I write the important points in my study to help me understand and remember.

句子结构混乱，writing 前不需要加 the；help me understanding 应改为 help me understand；句子需要分开，保持语法正确。

× Yes, as the technology grows very quickly, let's change about our life and how we do our writing.

✓ Yes, as technology grows very quickly, it changes our life and how we do our writing.

technology 是不可数名词，不用加 the；let's change 用法错误，应改为 it changes；句子表达更自然。

× So now I seldom writing and The thing is just for clearing my thoughts.

✓ So now I seldom write, and the thing is just for clearing my thoughts.

seldom 后面应接动词原形 write，而不是 writing。

× But before sometimes I just need to write down the for the notes now.

✓ But before, sometimes I just needed to write down notes.

the for the notes 结构错误，去掉多余的定冠词；时态保持一致。

× I think this depend on who I think I need to write.

✓ I think this depends on who I think I need to write for.

depend 第三人称单数应加 s；句子末尾缺少介词 for。

× If I just clear my souls or something I need to calculate, I will prefer to handwriting.

✓ If I just clear my thoughts or need to calculate something, I will prefer handwriting.

souls 用错，应为 thoughts；prefer 后面直接接动词原形或名词，不用 to；句子结构调整更通顺。

× But if it's writing for a work or journal, paper as in typing will be faster and convenient for me.

✓ But if it's writing for work or a journal, typing will be faster and more convenient for me.

a work 用法错误，应为 work（不可数）；paper as in typing 结构不对，改为 typing；convenient 前加 more 以匹配比较级。