写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并尝试用更自然的句式回答问题。

示例: Yes, I write quite a lot because I am a junior high school student and have a lot of homework that requires me to write with a pen.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但开头句子结构不够自然。建议使用更流畅的表达，并适当使用连接词使内容更连贯。

示例: I enjoy imitating the handwriting styles of famous calligraphers like Liu Gong Chun because it helps me improve my writing skills. By practicing their elegant and practical styles, I can make my handwriting more beautiful and easier to read, which gives me a sense of satisfaction and relaxation.

建议: 回答较简短，缺少连接词和细节。建议增加连接词并详细说明写作内容的变化。

示例: Yes, the things I write have changed over time. When I was a child, I used to write diaries as my teacher asked, but now I mainly use my handwriting skills to complete my homework.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意语法，避免重复，并清楚表达自己的观点。

示例: I prefer typing now because I am used to using my iPad to finish my homework, so I usually type my assignments.

建议: 回答较完整，但“Diaries”不应大写，且表达可以更自然。建议注意大小写和用词自然。

示例: I don't keep a diary anymore. When I was a child, my teacher encouraged me to write diaries regularly, but now I prefer to express my thoughts by talking with friends or using social media.

建议: 回答中有语法错误（help helps），且表达略显重复。建议注意语法一致性，并用更简洁的句子表达。

示例: I often use the WeChat app to record my life by posting on my Moments. I usually share photos and write about interesting things or my thoughts from recent days. This helps me keep memories and stay connected with my friends.

× Well, actually the answer is yes, because I'm a junior high school students and I have a lot of homework to do.

✓ Well, actually the answer is yes, because I'm a junior high school student and I have a lot of homework to do.

这里的'students'是复数形式，但主语是单数'I'，应使用单数'student'。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

× So when I when I wanted to finish my homework, I have to use pens to write.

✓ So when I want to finish my homework, I have to use pens to write.

句子中描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，'wanted'是过去时，与上下文时态不符。

× Actually, I joined imitating the handwriting styles of famous calligraphers like Liu Gong Chun because it helped me improve my writing skills.

✓ Actually, I enjoy imitating the handwriting styles of famous calligraphers like Liu Gong Chun because it helps me improve my writing skills.

动词'joined'用法错误，应该用'enjoy'表示喜欢做某事，且动词时态应与句意一致。

× Well, of course, when I was a child, my teacher asked me to write a diary, but when I grew up, I used my handwriting skills to finish my homework.

✓ Well, of course, when I was a child, my teacher asked me to write a diary, but now I use my handwriting skills to finish my homework.

句中描述现在的习惯动作，应使用一般现在时，'used'是过去时，与现在习惯不符。

× Actually I'm now prefer to typing because I I get used to using my iPad to finish my homework, so I usually have two typing words.

✓ Actually, I now prefer typing because I am used to using my iPad to finish my homework, so I usually type a lot of words.

'prefer to typing'结构错误，应为'prefer typing'；'I get used to'应为现在时态'am used to'；'have two typing words'表达不清，改为'type a lot of words'更合适。

× When I was a child, my teacher encouraged me to write Diaries regularly, but I don't enjoy it at all now.

✓ When I was a child, my teacher encouraged me to write diaries regularly, but I don't enjoy it at all now.

'Diaries'不需要大写，且作为普通名词应小写。

× I prefer to express my thought in other ways, like talking with friends or using social media.

✓ I prefer to express my thoughts in other ways, like talking with friends or using social media.

'thought'应为复数形式'thoughts'，表示多种想法。

× This method help helps me keep memories and also stay connected with my friends.

✓ This method helps me keep memories and also stay connected with my friends.

主语是单数'this method'，谓语动词应加-s，使用第三人称单数形式'helps'。