写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
I'm not interested in uh, writing, uh, because I think that my umm, literature is not good in the Admire Express. Whenever I uh, write down on the paper, uh, uh, it is not umm, it is not well, I'm being jealous.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
Well, uh, to be honest, I want to try about my day daily diary, uh, because I can't remember what, uh, what happened on that day. And then I, uh, also write, write about, uh, how grateful that I, uh, that I having now.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
No, I don't think so. Uh, because, uh, I writing just about 1 to uh, I writing because I want to remember, umm, that the day I have, uh, been through and maybe, uh, the thing I write that that not have, uh, change, uh, a lot.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
Well, I prefer uh, handwriting more than uh, typing because when I whenever I uh, writing with my pen, I can remember uh, exactly and umm, it also improve my memory.
考官
How often do you keep diaries?
考生
Well, I just only are writing my diary once, one or twice, umm, one or twice a week. Umm, that's because I, I use, I sometime I uh, forgot to, to write my, uh, diary.
考官
What other methods do you use to record your life?
考生
Well, uh, for me, the only way to, umm, to record my life is, is that I are writing my, uh, diary, uh, for example, on Monday. Uh, what I have, uh, goes, went through, through. I gotta write it down and then reflect it on with my.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 40.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại, không tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết và cố gắng diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc hơn.
示例: No, I don't write a lot because I find it difficult to express my thoughts clearly in writing. Whenever I try, I feel frustrated with my skills.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 55.0建议: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
示例: I like to write a daily diary because it helps me remember what happened each day. Also, I often write about things I am grateful for, which makes me feel positive.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 45.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
示例: No, I don't think the things I write will change because I write to remember my experiences exactly as they happened.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing with a pen helps me remember things better and improves my memory.
How often do you keep diaries?
分数: 50.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết.
示例: I write in my diary once or twice a week because sometimes I forget to do it.
What other methods do you use to record your life?
分数: 40.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
示例: I mainly record my life by writing a diary. For example, on Mondays, I write about what happened during the week and reflect on my experiences.
语法
× I think that my umm, literature is not good in the Admire Express.
✓ I think that my literature is not good at the Admire Express.
The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate a place or context is 'at'. Use 'at' to specify a particular place or event.
× I writing just about 1 to uh, I writing because I want to remember, umm, that the day I have, uh, been through
✓ I am just writing about 1 to uh, I write because I want to remember, umm, the day I have been through
The verb 'writing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The present continuous tense requires 'am/is/are' + verb + -ing. Also, 'I writing' should be 'I write' for simple present tense.
× I writing just about 1 to uh, I writing because I want to remember, umm, that the day I have, uh, been through
✓ I am just writing about 1 to uh, I write because I want to remember, umm, the day I have been through
The phrase 'about 1 to uh' is unclear and likely incorrect preposition usage. It should be clarified or omitted for clarity.
× I having now.
✓ I have now.
The verb 'having' is incorrectly used as a main verb without auxiliary. The correct form is 'I have now' to express possession or state.
× I writing just about 1 to uh, I writing because I want to remember, umm, that the day I have, uh, been through and maybe, uh, the thing I write that that not have, uh, change, uh, a lot.
✓ I am just writing about one to uh, I write because I want to remember the day I have been through and maybe the things I write have not changed a lot.
The phrase 'that that not have change' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'have not changed' to use the present perfect tense correctly. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match context.
× when I whenever I uh, writing with my pen, I can remember uh, exactly and umm, it also improve my memory.
✓ when I write with my pen, I can remember exactly and it also improves my memory.
The phrase 'when I whenever I uh, writing' is redundant and incorrect. 'Whenever' or 'when' can be used, but not both together. Also, 'writing' should be 'write' to match tense. 'Improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular subject 'it'.
× I just only are writing my diary once, one or twice, umm, one or twice a week.
✓ I only write in my diary once or twice a week.
The phrase 'I just only are writing' is incorrect. 'Are writing' is plural and does not agree with singular subject 'I'. Also, 'once, one or twice' is redundant; 'once or twice' is sufficient.
× I use, I sometime I uh, forgot to, to write my, uh, diary.
✓ I sometimes forget to write my diary.
The phrase 'I use, I sometime I uh, forgot' is confusing and incorrect. 'Sometimes' is the correct adverb, and 'forget' should be in present tense to match 'sometimes'.
× the only way to, umm, to record my life is, is that I are writing my, uh, diary
✓ the only way to record my life is that I write my diary
The phrase 'I are writing' is incorrect because 'are' does not agree with singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I write'.
× on Monday. Uh, what I have, uh, goes, went through, through.
✓ on Monday, what I went through.
The phrase 'goes, went through' mixes present and past tense. The correct past tense 'went through' should be used alone.
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