天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，并且可以用更具体的词汇描述天气变化。

示例: The weather where I live varies a lot throughout the year. Sometimes it can be sunny in the morning and rainy in the afternoon.

建议: 回答应更简洁自然，避免语法错误，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I prefer cold weather because it is usually hot in my city. I often wish it could be colder, maybe even snowy sometimes.

建议: 回答中应注意语法正确，使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions often make places slippery, which can be dangerous and cause accidents.

建议: 时态使用不当，应使用现在时，并且可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it helps me decide what to wear.

建议: 回答应更准确表达观点，避免语法错误，并具体说明影响。

示例: In recent years, the weather has become hotter due to climate change, so I often use air conditioning to stay comfortable.

建议: 回答应更自然流畅，注意语法和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I always want to visit Hainan during our winter holidays because it is warm there, so I often go there.

× The weather has big difference in different seasons.

✓ The weather has big differences in different seasons.

这里的difference是可数名词，表示“差异”，因为指的是多种不同的差异，应该用复数形式differences。

× wet weather always make the best place slippery.

✓ wet weather always makes the best place slippery.

主语wet weather是第三人称单数，谓语动词make应加-s变为makes，保持主谓一致。

× Yes, I checked the weather forecast every day because it's important to me.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it's important to me.

句子中表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时check，而不是过去时checked。

× I always want to Hainan when our winter holiday coming because it's warm there, so I often visit Hainan.

✓ I always want to go to Hainan when our winter holiday comes because it's warm there, so I often visit Hainan.

want后面需要动词不定式go，表示“想去”；go后面需要介词to表示方向；holiday是单数，谓语动词应为comes，保持主谓一致。