天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达，如“often raining”和“usually wet”意思重复。可以简洁描述天气特点，并适当扩展细节。

示例: The weather in my city is mostly rainy, which keeps the ground wet and the air fresh.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“eat it easily”不合适，且句子结构不清晰。建议简洁表达喜好并给出具体原因，使用连词使句子连贯。

示例: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable, and I can easily keep warm by wearing layers. On the other hand, hot weather makes it difficult to cool down since you can't remove too many clothes.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“pre spot”不明确。建议使用正确的词汇，句子简洁且逻辑清晰。

示例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable. Also, dry weather is perfect for outdoor sports, which I enjoy.

建议: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多。建议直接回答习惯并说明频率，句子结构清晰。

示例: I didn't use to check the weather forecast, but now I check it regularly to avoid getting caught in the rain.

建议: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“polynomials”和“melted irons”不合适，且句子不通顺。建议使用正确词汇，表达清晰具体。

示例: I believe climate change has caused global temperatures to rise, threatening species like polar bears because melting ice makes it harder for them to find food and survive.

建议: 回答较好，但有语法错误，如“experiment a different climate conditions”应为“experience different climate conditions”。建议注意语法和词汇搭配。

示例: Yes, definitely. It would be a great opportunity to experience different climate conditions and lifestyles. For example, I want to visit Harbin in northern China to enjoy the snow and the winter festival, which are very different from my city.

× Well, the weather where I live is often raining and the ground is usually wet.

✓ Well, the weather where I live is often rainy and the ground is usually wet.

这里“raining”是动词的现在分词形式，表示动作，而句子需要形容词来描述天气状况，正确用法是“rainy”。

× I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel comfortable and I can eat it easily for me to warm up by dressing clothes.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel comfortable and it is easy for me to warm up by dressing warmly.

句中“eat it easily for me to warm up by dressing clothes”表达不清且用词错误，应改为“it is easy for me to warm up by dressing warmly”，使句子通顺且语义明确。

× In contrast, in hot weather it is hard to cool down because you cannot take off your clothes.

✓ In contrast, in hot weather it is hard to cool down because you cannot take off your clothes easily.

原句缺少副词“easily”来修饰“take off”，使句子更完整和自然。

× I prefer dry weather because it because the wet weather make me feel sweaty and uncomfortable and besides the dry weather provides an ideal condition for me to pre spot which I enjoy.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable, and besides, dry weather provides ideal conditions for me to do sports, which I enjoy.

原句结构混乱，有重复“because”，动词“make”应为“makes”，短语“pre spot”错误，应为“do sports”，需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Well, in the past no, but now I'm not checking the forecast frequency to avoid getting wet due to the rainy day.

✓ Well, in the past no, but now I check the forecast frequently to avoid getting wet due to rainy days.

“I'm not checking”时态和频率副词使用不当，应使用一般现在时“check”加副词“frequently”，且“the rainy day”应为复数“rainy days”。

× Well, I think the climate change has significantly contributed to the rise in the global temperatures which will threaten the survival of some species such as the polynomials because the melted irons make them harder to fight food or survive.

✓ Well, I think climate change has significantly contributed to the rise in global temperatures, which will threaten the survival of some species such as the polar bears because the melting ice makes it harder for them to find food or survive.

“the climate change”应为“climate change”，“the global temperatures”改为“global temperatures”，“polynomials”错误，应为“polar bears”，“melted irons”应为“melting ice”，“make”应为“makes”，“fight food”应为“find food”。

× Yes, definitely. I would say it is an opportunity to experiment a different climate conditions and different lifestyle.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would say it is an opportunity to experience different climate conditions and a different lifestyle.

“experiment a different climate conditions”用词错误，应为“experience different climate conditions”，“a different lifestyle”前需加不定冠词“a”。

× For example, I would like to travel to the Harbin in the north of China to enjoy the snow and the winter festival, which are totally different from my city.

✓ For example, I would like to travel to Harbin in the north of China to enjoy the snow and the winter festival, which are totally different from my city.

“the Harbin”中“Harbin”是专有名词，前面不需要定冠词“the”。