天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để mô tả thời tiết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I live in the South of Vietnam, where there are two main seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. Currently, it is the rainy season, so it rains almost every day. Despite the rain, the weather remains quite hot during this time.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather uncomfortable. When it's cold, I can wear warm clothes to stay comfortable. Also, cold weather feels refreshing compared to the heat.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I definitely prefer dry weather because it allows me to spend time outdoors with my friends and family. We can play games, have meals outside, and enjoy various activities without worrying about the rain.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going out. It helps me decide whether I need to bring an umbrella or dress appropriately for the day.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích cụ thể các tác động của biến đổi khí hậu và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: Climate change has caused many negative effects recently. For example, glaciers are melting faster, and deforestation is increasing, which harms the environment and affects people's lives.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I want to experience new environments. Exploring various climates would be exciting and help me learn more about my country.

× I live in the South of Vietnam so it's usually have to season the dry and hot and the rain.

✓ I live in the South of Vietnam so it usually has two seasons: dry and hot, and rainy.

The modal verb 'have to' is incorrectly used here. The sentence intends to describe the usual seasons, so 'have to' should be replaced with 'has' to indicate possession. Also, 'two seasons' is the correct quantifier, and 'rain' should be 'rainy' to describe the season.

× So it is rain right now and it always rain every day and I can't go anywhere because of raining so and in the rain season it is always hot and hot.

✓ So it is raining right now and it always rains every day, and I can't go anywhere because of the rain. In the rainy season, it is always hot.

The verb 'rain' should be in the present participle form 'raining' to describe the current action. 'Always rain' should be 'always rains' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Because of raining' is incorrect; it should be 'because of the rain'. Also, 'rain season' should be 'rainy season' and avoid repetition of 'hot'.

× I always we have been in the hot season in Vietnam, so I prefer cold weather.

✓ We are always in the hot season in Vietnam, so I prefer cold weather.

The phrase 'I always we have been' is incorrect and confusing. The correct present tense to describe a habitual state is 'We are always in the hot season'. 'Have been' is present perfect and not suitable here.

× I hate hot. It makes me feel like uncomfortable and when it when it is cold I can wear more clothes to avoid being cold.

✓ I hate the heat. It makes me feel uncomfortable, and when it is cold, I can wear more clothes to avoid feeling cold.

'I hate hot' is incorrect; 'the heat' is the correct noun form. 'Feel like uncomfortable' should be 'feel uncomfortable'. Repetition of 'when it' is an error. 'Avoid being cold' should be 'avoid feeling cold' for clarity.

× But it is hard, I cannot get off.

✓ But it is hard; I cannot get used to it.

'Get off' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'get used to' meaning to adapt. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× Of course, I love dry weather because it makes it helps me to go outside with my friends or with my family to play something or to entertain or to go and have lunch, have dinner and we can do a lot of activities.

✓ Of course, I love dry weather because it helps me go outside with my friends or family to play games, entertain, or go have lunch or dinner, and we can do a lot of activities.

The phrase 'it makes it helps me' is redundant; only 'it helps me' is needed. 'Play something' is vague; 'play games' is clearer. 'To entertain' is unclear; 'entertain' as a verb needs an object or should be rephrased.

× I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every morning.

✓ I have a habit of checking the weather forecast every morning.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I often check it every day and every morning before I go outside because it helps me to know how the weather will be today and all.

✓ I often check it every day and every morning before I go outside because it helps me know what the weather will be like today.

The phrase 'helps me to know' can be simplified to 'helps me know'. 'How the weather will be today and all' is informal and unclear; 'what the weather will be like today' is clearer.

× Do I have to bring the umbrella?

✓ Do I have to bring an umbrella?

The article 'the' is incorrect here; 'an umbrella' is the correct indefinite article to use with 'umbrella' in this question.

× Well, actually we can't deny that climate change have a lot of bad effects on us in recent years.

✓ Well, actually we can't deny that climate change has a lot of bad effects on us in recent years.

The subject 'climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× It makes the ice melt more than in the past and it makes no more tree being cutted and makes the people have been watching.

✓ It causes the ice to melt more than in the past, and it has stopped trees from being cut down, and people have been watching.

'Makes the ice melt' is acceptable but 'causes the ice to melt' is clearer. 'No more tree being cutted' is incorrect; 'trees being cut down' is correct, and 'cutted' is not a word; the past participle is 'cut'. 'Makes the people have been watching' is incorrect; 'people have been watching' is correct.

× Of course, yes, I want to experience more and more.

✓ Of course, yes, I want to experience more and more.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I have a dream of be of visiting all the cities in my country so I can.

✓ I have a dream of visiting all the cities in my country so I can.

The phrase 'of be of visiting' is incorrect; it should be 'of visiting'. The extra 'be of' is unnecessary and grammatically wrong.

× I want to experience their climate.

✓ I want to experience their climates.

Since 'all the cities' is plural, 'climate' should be pluralized to 'climates' to match the plural subject.

× I love experiences.

✓ I love experiencing new things.

The noun 'experiences' is vague here; using the verb form 'experiencing' with an object clarifies the meaning.