天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够流畅，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地描述天气特点，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: In Hong Kong, summers are hot and humid, while winters are cooler but still quite humid, which makes it feel colder.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，且内容不够连贯。建议直接表达喜好，并用具体原因支持观点。

示例: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel tired and less energetic, so I usually stay indoors during summer.

建议: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，清楚表达喜好并给出理由。

示例: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet weather makes summers feel hotter and winters colder, while dry weather is more comfortable due to low humidity.

建议: 回答不够流畅，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明习惯，并用具体场景支持。

示例: I usually don't check the weather forecast, but I do before swimming, important events, or traveling to prepare accordingly.

建议: 回答内容较为简单，表达有语法错误。建议用更准确的句子描述气候变化的影响，并举具体例子。

示例: Recently, I have noticed extreme weather events like heavy rains causing floods in countries such as Thailand, Japan, and Hong Kong.

建议: 回答表达较为清楚，但句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，清晰表达原因。

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I dislike the high humidity where I live and prefer dry and cold weather.

× In winter, Oh, I think the humidity is still high, but it's very cold with them, with them high humidity because I'm feeling all the body.

✓ In winter, oh, I think the humidity is still high, but it's very cold with that high humidity because I feel it all over my body.

这里“with them, with them high humidity”使用了错误的介词和代词，应该用“with that high humidity”来表达“伴随着那种高湿度”。另外，“I'm feeling all the body”应改为“I feel it all over my body”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Your friend, I am quite afraid of cold, but I'm rather cold and hot because the hot weather makes me lost energy to do most of the activities.

✓ To be honest, I am quite afraid of the cold, but I prefer cold to hot because hot weather makes me lose energy to do most activities.

“makes me lost energy”中“lost”应为动词原形“lose”，因为在使役动词“make”后，动词用原形。

× So most of the time in summer I stay indoor or to avoid with.

✓ So most of the time in summer I stay indoors or avoid going out.

“stay indoor”应为“stay indoors”，表示在室内；“to avoid with”结构不正确，应改为“avoid going out”表示避免外出。

× Absolutely tried, I don't like words where there because it make me feel extremely hot in summer and very chilly in winter but dry the weather could be more comfortable and low humidity will make it.

✓ Absolutely tired, I don't like places where it is very humid because it makes me feel extremely hot in summer and very chilly in winter, but dry weather could be more comfortable and low humidity would make it better.

“words where there”应为“places where it is very humid”；“it make me”应为“it makes me”；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× I don't have habit of tracking weather forecast, but sometime if I have a swimming or big events or the travel activities I will see the forecast to uh notice the maybe the flight to prevent.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast, but sometimes if I have swimming, big events, or travel activities, I will check the forecast to maybe prevent flight delays.

“have habit of tracking”应为“have the habit of checking”；“a swimming”应去掉冠词；“to uh notice the maybe the flight to prevent”表达不清，改为“to maybe prevent flight delays”更准确。

× How recently I found the weather in most of the country are quite extreme, especially the heavy rain.

✓ Recently, I found the weather in most countries is quite extreme, especially the heavy rain.

“most of the country”应为复数“most countries”；“are”应改为“is”，因为weather是不可数名词，谓语用单数。

× Just like last week, the heavy rain is occurring in Thailand, Japan, Hong Kong and the water, the flooding.

✓ Just like last week, heavy rain occurred in Thailand, Japan, and Hong Kong, causing flooding.

“the water, the flooding”表达不自然，应改为“causing flooding”；“is occurring”时态不合适，改为过去时“occurred”。

× Yes, because I don't like the weather in the place I live, it's too high humidity and I like the weather in the other country that is more dry and cold and I don't need to withstand it the mood that induced by the humidity.

✓ Yes, because I don't like the weather in the place where I live; it has too high humidity. I like the weather in other countries that is drier and colder, and I don't need to endure the mood induced by the humidity.

“in the place I live”应为“in the place where I live”；“more dry”应为比较级“drier”；“withstand it the mood”结构错误，应为“endure the mood”；“induced by the humidity”前应加定冠词“the mood”。