天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“good hot”和“get wax”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免拼写错误。

示例: The weather where I live is usually sunny and quite hot, so I often get sunburned when I play outside.

建议: 回答结构混乱，表达不连贯，且有语法错误。建议先明确表达喜好，然后用具体理由支持，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I prefer cold weather because my skin feels healthier during winter, and I enjoy wearing hoodies when it's chilly outside.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。

示例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty, so I have to change my clothes often.

建议: 回答时态混用且表达不连贯，含糊不清。建议使用正确时态，明确说明习惯和频率，并避免含糊表达。

示例: I usually check the weather forecast before going out with my friends to make sure I dress appropriately.

建议: 回答内容不准确且表达混乱，词汇使用错误。建议学习相关词汇和表达，清晰描述气候变化的影响。

示例: I believe climate change is a serious problem because pollution, like plastic waste, harms the environment and threatens our planet.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁表达愿望，说明原因，并使用正确的句子结构。

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience new weather and wear different types of clothes.

× The weather is always sunny and good hot where I live and I always get wax when I play outside.

✓ The weather is always sunny and very hot where I live and I always get sunburned when I play outside.

这里的“wax”用错了，应该用“sunburned”表示晒伤。sunburned是形容词，表示被太阳晒伤的状态。

× The weather is always sunny and good hot where I live and I always get wax when I play outside.

✓ The weather is always sunny and very hot where I live and I always get sunburned when I play outside.

“good hot”表达不正确，应该用副词“very”修饰形容词“hot”，表示“非常热”。

× I prefer cold weather actually I do little like winter because my skin stays healthier in winter and also I can wear a hoodie in dark weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather. Actually, I like winter a little because my skin stays healthier in winter and also I can wear a hoodie in cold weather.

“I do little like winter”表达错误，应该是“I like winter a little”。“dark weather”应为“cold weather”，因为穿连帽衫通常是因为天气冷。

× I prefer cold weather actually I do little like winter because my skin stays healthier in winter and also I can wear a hoodie in dark weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather. Actually, I like winter a little because my skin stays healthier in winter and also I can wear a hoodie in cold weather.

“dark weather”用词不当，应为“cold weather”，因为这里强调的是天气冷。

× I prefer dry weather a little bit, but because I think the wet weather is very uncomfortable which makes me always sweat sweat and I need to change my clothes 1000 times a day.

✓ I prefer dry weather a little bit because I think wet weather is very uncomfortable, which makes me sweat a lot and I need to change my clothes many times a day.

“makes me always sweat sweat”重复且用词不当，应改为“makes me sweat a lot”。“1000 times”夸张且不合适，改为“many times”。

× Maybe it's dry whether it's good.

✓ Maybe dry weather is good.

“whether”用错，应为“weather”。句子结构不完整，改为“Maybe dry weather is good.”。

× Actually, I usually check about the weather forecast when I was hanging out with my friend.

✓ Actually, I usually check the weather forecast when I am hanging out with my friends.

“was hanging out”时态不对，和“usually”搭配应使用一般现在时“am hanging out”。“friend”应为复数“friends”。

× Actually, I usually check about the weather forecast when I was hanging out with my friend.

✓ Actually, I usually check the weather forecast when I am hanging out with my friends.

“check about”用法错误，正确用法是“check the weather forecast”。

× I will always check the forecast in advance.

✓ I always check the forecast in advance.

“will always”表达未来习惯不合适，通常用一般现在时表示习惯动作。

× Umm, actually when I check the weather. I would definitely scare about it.

✓ Umm, actually when I check the weather, I would definitely be scared about it.

“scare”应为被动形容词“be scared”，表示感到害怕。

× I think that climate change is a little bit serious and over the years, because people usually do grow the plastic photo on the ground and make the environment getting worse, so I think it's a little bit in danger.

✓ I think that climate change has become a little serious over the years because people usually throw plastic photos on the ground and make the environment worse, so I think it's a bit dangerous.

“do grow the plastic photo”用词错误，应为“throw plastic photos”。“getting worse”应改为“worse”。“a little bit in danger”表达不当，应为“a bit dangerous”。

× Yes, I really want to visit our country or cities that have a given climate is that can make me feel comfortable in that place and I can enjoy different kind of weather and we're in different kind of clothes, which makes yourself real.

✓ Yes, I really want to visit other countries or cities that have a certain climate that can make me feel comfortable in that place, and I can enjoy different kinds of weather and wear different kinds of clothes, which makes me feel real.

“our country”应为“other countries”。“a given climate is that”结构错误，应为“a certain climate that”。“we're in different kind of clothes”应为“wear different kinds of clothes”。“makes yourself real”应为“makes me feel real”。