天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and complete answer without hesitation. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words. For example, say 'I live in Georgia, and the weather varies a lot. Sometimes it is rainy, and other times it is sunny.'

示例: I live in Georgia, and the weather changes throughout the year. For example, it is often sunny in the summer and rainy in the spring.

建议: Make sure to understand the question and answer it directly. Avoid unrelated words and clarify your preference with reasons. For example, say 'I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities in the summer.'

示例: I prefer hot weather because I like going to the beach and spending time outside during summer.

建议: If you don't understand a word, try to ask for clarification or guess based on context. Also, learn common weather vocabulary like 'dry' and 'wet' to improve your answers.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and I can go outside without getting wet.

建议: Try to understand the question carefully and answer fully. Use correct grammar and add details about when and how often you check the forecast.

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave home to plan my day.

建议: Complete your sentences and provide specific effects of climate change. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Climate change is a serious global problem. It causes extreme weather and affects people's lives.'

示例: Climate change is a serious global problem. It causes more storms and droughts, which affect farming and people's health.

建议: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to compare your preferences. For example, 'I prefer sunny climates, so I would like to visit cities with sunny weather, but I don't like rainy places.'

示例: I would like to visit cities with sunny weather because I enjoy the sun. However, I don't like rainy climates, so I would avoid those places.

× I live in Georgia and uh, there is a many types of weather like rainy, like sunny. It's uh.

✓ I live in Georgia and uh, there are many types of weather like rainy and sunny. It's uh.

The phrase 'there is a many types' is incorrect because 'types' is plural and requires the plural form 'there are' instead of 'there is'. Also, 'a many' is incorrect; 'many' does not need an article. The correct form is 'there are many types'.

× Oh, I love Hot Wheels. I love summer because I'm happy. This feather.

✓ Oh, I love hot weather. I love summer because it makes me happy. This weather.

'Hot Wheels' is a brand name and incorrect in this context; it should be 'hot weather'. 'I'm happy' is a personal feeling but the sentence needs to explain why summer is liked, so 'because it makes me happy' is clearer. 'This feather' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'this weather'.

× I don't know what dry or wet means.

✓ I don't know what dry or wet weather means.

The sentence lacks the noun 'weather' after 'dry or wet' to clarify the meaning. Without it, the sentence is incomplete or unclear.

× I don't understand this question, but maybe you mean how often I checking the weather? Yes I'm I'm usually doing that.

✓ I don't understand this question, but maybe you mean how often I check the weather? Yes, I usually do that.

The verb form 'I checking' is incorrect; it should be 'I check' to match the present simple tense. Also, 'I'm usually doing that' is awkward; 'I usually do that' is more natural. The definite article usage is acceptable here.

× Climate change is global problem in recent years and I think the effects of climate change in recent years are so bad because people, umm.

✓ Climate change is a global problem in recent years and I think the effects of climate change in recent years are very bad because of people, umm.

The phrase 'is global problem' is missing the article 'a' before 'global problem'. Also, 'so bad' is better replaced with 'very bad' for clarity. 'Because people' is incomplete; 'because of people' is more appropriate.

× If you mean in the different climates, for example rainy weather, I don't like it. So I don't like it. Visit other cities that have different climates. And if you mean sunny weather in other city, I like it.

✓ If you mean different climates, for example rainy weather, I don't like it. So I don't like visiting other cities that have different climates. And if you mean sunny weather in another city, I like it.

The phrase 'in the different climates' is incorrect; it should be 'different climates' without 'in the'. 'Visit other cities' is a fragment; it should be 'visiting other cities'. 'In other city' should be 'in another city' to use the correct article and adjective.