天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать связки для логичности и избегать повторов. Например, можно добавить больше деталей о погоде.

示例: The weather in my city is usually cold because it is located in the northern part of the country near the ocean, which makes the climate quite chilly throughout the year.

建议: Ответ содержит повторения и немного неструктурирован. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику для выражения предпочтений.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I dislike the heat. Also, my birthday and New Year fall in winter, which makes the cold season my favorite time of the year.

建议: Ответ не совсем ясный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует чётко выразить предпочтения и использовать связки для логичности.

示例: I prefer wet weather, but only when it's not hot, because I find cold weather uncomfortable and tiring.

建议: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясные фразы. Нужно улучшить грамматику и структуру, а также использовать связующие слова для плавности.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it helps me decide what to wear, especially to know if it will be rainy or sunny.

建议: Ответ слишком короткий и неинформативный. Рекомендуется подготовить хотя бы простое мнение или пример, чтобы показать способность рассуждать.

示例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events recently, like stronger storms and unusual temperatures.

建议: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать связки и более разнообразную лексику для выражения мыслей.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I am tired of the weather here, and I find traveling interesting and enjoyable.

× In my city weather is cold because I live in the north city and my city near the ocean.

✓ In my city, the weather is cold because I live in the northern city and my city is near the ocean.

The word 'weather' is uncountable and needs the definite article 'the' before it. 'North city' should be 'northern city' to use the correct adjective form. Also, 'my city near the ocean' lacks the verb 'is'.

× In my city weather is cold because I live in the north city and my city near the ocean.

✓ In my city, the weather is cold because I live in the northern city and my city is near the ocean.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'weather' to specify the weather in that city. Also, 'the north city' should be 'the northern city' to use the correct adjective form.

× I prefer cold because I hate hot weather and I like cold because my birthday and new year in winter.

✓ I prefer cold because I hate hot weather and I like cold because my birthday and New Year are in winter.

'New Year' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. Also, 'my birthday and New Year in winter' lacks the verb 'are'.

× I prefer cold because I hate hot weather and I like cold because my birthday and new year in winter.

✓ I prefer cold because I hate hot weather and I like cold because my birthday and New Year are in winter.

The phrase 'my birthday and New Year' refers to two events, so the verb should be plural 'are'.

× They are my favorite holidays.

✓ They are my favorite holidays.

This sentence is correct; 'holidays' is plural and matches the plural pronoun 'They'.

× I prefer wet weather but not hot because cold weather is uncomfortable and tired for me.

✓ I prefer wet weather but not hot because cold weather is uncomfortable and tiring for me.

The adjective 'tired' describes a feeling of the subject, but here the weather causes the feeling, so 'tiring' (present participle) is correct.

× Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it is important for me now when rainy day or sunny and I will. Wearing on the weather.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it is important for me to know if it is a rainy or sunny day, and I will dress according to the weather.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and incomplete phrases. 'When rainy day or sunny' should be 'if it is a rainy or sunny day'. 'Wearing on the weather' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'dress according to the weather'.

× Yes. I like to visit other cities that have different climate in the my city because I tired of weather in the my city and I like traveling because it is interesting for me. Yeah.

✓ Yes. I like to visit other cities that have a different climate from my city because I am tired of the weather in my city and I like traveling because it is interesting for me.

'Different climate' should be 'a different climate' (singular with article). 'In the my city' is incorrect; it should be 'from my city' and 'in my city'. Also, 'I tired' should be 'I am tired'.

× Yes. I like to visit other cities that have different climate in the my city because I tired of weather in the my city and I like traveling because it is interesting for me. Yeah.

✓ Yes. I like to visit other cities that have a different climate from my city because I am tired of the weather in my city and I like traveling because it is interesting for me.

The verb 'tired' is incorrectly used in past tense form; the correct form is 'am tired' to express current state.