天气Part 1 评分报告

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Part 1

考官

What's the weather like where you live?

考生

Is too hot.

考官

Do you prefer cold or hot weather?

考生

I like hot weather because I can eat watermelon, play with friends and go to the playground. But in cold weather I come to go out to play and I come to eat watermelon.

考官

Do you prefer dry or wet weather?

考生

Try because remember the wet weather I will throw down.

考官

Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?

考生

No, I never to look the weather so I think it's so boring.

考官

What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?

考生

Sorry, I didn't know.

考官

Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?

考生

No, I think it's so angry.

评估

总分

总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.0发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

语法

Sentence structure errors

× Is too hot.

It is too hot.

句子缺少主语,英语句子必须有主语和谓语。这里应加上主语'It',构成完整句子。

Sentence structure errors

× But in cold weather I come to go out to play and I come to eat watermelon.

But in cold weather, I don't go out to play and I don't eat watermelon.

原句结构混乱,表达不清。应使用否定形式'don't'表示不做某事,且去掉多余的'come to'。

Sentence structure errors

× Try because remember the wet weather I will throw down.

I try to remember that in wet weather I might fall down.

原句语法混乱,缺少主语和正确的动词形式。应补充主语,使用不定式表达目的,调整句子结构使其通顺。

Incorrect use of verb forms

× No, I never to look the weather so I think it's so boring.

No, I never look at the weather, so I think it's so boring.

'never'后面应直接接动词原形,且动词'look'后应加介词'at'表示看天气。去掉多余的'to'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× No, I think it's so angry.

No, I think it's so annoying.

'angry'是形容人的情绪,不能用来形容天气或事物。应使用形容事物的形容词'annoying'。

重点词汇

AngryIrate; Heated; Lose one's temper
BoringTedious
ColdChilly; Unfriendly
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
SorrySad; Full of pity; Regretful; Pitiful; Apologies
WetDamp; Rainy; Sticky; Aqueous; Dampen
多说

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