天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“I'm living”而非“How I'm living”，并且要完整表达感受。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复和不连贯。

示例: I live in Saint John, and the weather is generally nice, although it often rains. I don't really like rainy days because they make me feel a bit gloomy.

建议: 回答时应避免犹豫语气，如“MMM”，并且句子要完整。建议直接表达观点，并用具体理由支持，同时注意句子结构完整。

示例: I prefer hot weather because it is better for our health. For example, I can do more exercises like swimming when it's warm.

建议: 回答时要注意语法正确，如“makes”应为“make”，并且避免句子不完整。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，且具体说明原因。

示例: I prefer dry weather because I can do outdoor activities like walking or jogging more easily. Also, dry weather makes me feel more comfortable and energetic.

建议: 回答中出现了不相关内容“checking about cars”，且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免填充词，表达清楚习惯和频率。

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day, especially if I have plans for the next day. This helps me arrange my schedule accordingly.

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不完整，如“the cold especially in the summer and in the winter”不清楚。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达观点。

示例: In my opinion, climate change has caused the weather to become hotter in summer and colder in winter. This might be due to increased carbon dioxide emissions.

建议: 回答不连贯且句子不完整。建议直接表达愿望并举具体例子，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, Australia has seasons that are opposite to those in China, which would be interesting to experience.

× How I'm living in Saint John now.

✓ I am living in Saint John now.

句子开头的'How'使用不当，应直接陈述现在的状态，且主语和谓语顺序应为'I am'，符合英语陈述句的语序。

× sometimes it's raining.

✓ sometimes it rains.

此处描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，'it rains'而非进行时'raining'。

× To be honest, I don't wake.

✓ To be honest, I don't like it.

原句缺少完整谓语和宾语，'wake'用法错误，应表达不喜欢湿冷天气，故改为'I don't like it'。

× I don't like the wet weather because it can make me feel.

✓ I don't like the wet weather because it can make me feel uncomfortable.

句子缺少宾语，'make me feel'后应接形容词或名词，补充'uncomfortable'使句意完整。

× MMM about this I will prefer the hot weather

✓ About this, I prefer hot weather.

'will prefer'用法不当，表达偏好时用一般现在时'prefer'，且去掉多余的'MMM'。

× I think the hot weather is good for our body and you know I can do more exercise in the hallway such as swimming or.

✓ I think hot weather is good for our body, and I can do more exercise outdoors such as swimming.

'in the hallway'不合适，应为户外运动；句子末尾不完整，去掉'or'并补全句子。

× I would prefer the dry weather because I can do more outdoor exercise like walking or jogging is in dry weather

✓ I would prefer dry weather because I can do more outdoor exercises like walking or jogging in dry weather.

'exercise'应为复数'exercises'表示多种运动，且去掉多余的'is'。

× and they also makes me feel more comfortable and energetic.

✓ and they also make me feel more comfortable and energetic.

主语'they'为复数，谓语动词应用复数形式'make'。

× I especially don't like the rainy.

✓ I especially don't like the rain.

'rainy'是形容词，需用名词'rain'表示雨天。

× I do have the habit of a checking about cars almost every day

✓ I do have the habit of checking the weather almost every day.

'a checking about cars'不合适，应为'checking the weather'，且去掉多余的冠词'a'。

× if I have to do something tomorrow and I will check the weather today previously

✓ if I have to do something tomorrow, I will check the weather today in advance.

'previously'用法不当，改为'in advance'更符合语境，且句子需加逗号分隔。

× I think the weather is becoming hotter and the cold especially in the summer and in the winter.

✓ I think the weather is becoming hotter, especially in summer and winter.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的'the cold'，简化表达。

× the cold especially in the summer and in the winter.

✓ especially in summer and winter.

去掉多余的定冠词'the'，季节名词前一般不加冠词。

× the Australia weather, the Australia seasons is completely different. China such As for example.

✓ The Australian weather and seasons are completely different from those in China, for example.

'Australia'应用形容词形式'Australian'，主谓一致错误，且句子结构不完整，需补充完整。

× For example, it is a summary.

✓ For example, it is summer.

'summary'拼写错误，应为'summer'表示夏天。