天气— Part 1 评分报告

× I live in Kazakhstan and my country known for its cold weather.

✓ I live in Kazakhstan and my country is known for its cold weather.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to form the correct present simple passive structure 'is known'. Without the verb, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× I prefer not to cold and not too hot.

✓ I prefer not too cold and not too hot.

The phrase 'not to cold' is incorrect; the correct form is 'not too cold' where 'too' is an adverb modifying the adjective 'cold'. Also, 'to' is a preposition and does not fit here.

× I'm keen on a warm weather because umm, I feel very awful if I felt a cold or hot.

✓ I'm keen on warm weather because, umm, I feel very awful if I feel cold or hot.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the article 'a'. Also, the verb tense in the conditional clause should be present simple 'if I feel' instead of past 'if I felt' to express general conditions.

× I feel very awful if I felt a cold or hot.

✓ I feel very awful if I feel cold or hot.

The conditional sentence requires the present simple tense in the 'if' clause to express general truths or repeated actions, not past tense.

× when I stayed at home I like wet weather.

✓ when I stay at home I like wet weather.

The sentence mixes past tense 'stayed' with present tense 'like'. To express habitual actions, present simple tense should be used consistently.

× But if I go to the beach, of course I wanted to try.

✓ But if I go to the beach, of course I want to try.

The verb 'wanted' is past tense, but the conditional 'if I go' is present/future. The verb should be present tense 'want' to match the conditional.

× I don't have this habit.

✓ I don't have this habit.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I'm not checking the weather forecast.

✓ I don't check the weather forecast.

The present continuous 'I'm not checking' is not appropriate for habitual actions. The simple present 'I don't check' is correct for habits.

× I think that they are effects of climate change in recent years, extremely hazardous for our environment because step by step every year we have a any natural disasters like climate change or CLI climate warming, like multi-scale.

✓ I think that the effects of climate change in recent years are extremely hazardous for our environment because step by step every year we have natural disasters like climate change or climate warming on multiple scales.

The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and confusing here; 'the effects' is the subject. Also, 'a any' is incorrect; 'any' alone or 'some' should be used. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Until I was 7 I always watching any traveling clocks to other countries like Dubai or or Egypt.

✓ Until I was 7, I always watched travel shows about other countries like Dubai or Egypt.

The verb 'watching' is incorrect here; past simple 'watched' is needed to describe past habitual actions. 'Traveling clocks' is incorrect; likely meant 'travel shows'. Also, 'any' is unnecessary.