天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“it rarely runs”应为“it rarely rains”，建议注意动词的正确使用，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。

示例: It's freezing now because it's winter, and it rarely rains here since this is a relatively dry area surrounded by mountains.

建议: 回答表达较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“hiding”应为“hide”，建议注意动词形式一致性，并且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I prefer cold weather because I don't like sweating during summer. Also, in cold weather, I can wear more clothes or just stay in bed, so the weather doesn't bother me.

建议: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“liked right weather”应为“like dry weather”，“make the make the weather feel more colder”表达重复且错误，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和错误表达。

示例: I like dry weather because wet weather makes it feel colder than dry weather. When I lived in Taipei, the wet weather was often chilly.

建议: 回答内容完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“whether should I bring”应为“whether I should bring”，建议简化句子结构并注意语序。

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going to the office because I want to know if I should bring an umbrella or wear a thicker coat.

建议: 回答表达不完整且语法错误较多，如“rising of temperature”应为“rising temperatures”，“climate change bring”应为“climate change brings”，建议加强句子完整性和语法准确性。

示例: I think the biggest effect of climate change is rising temperatures. In Taiwan, especially in my area, we have experienced more typhoons in autumn recently.

建议: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在词汇错误，如“dessert”应为“desert”，建议注意词汇拼写和使用，并可增加连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Egypt to experience their extremely hot and dry weather, which has created the desert. I also want to see the desert scenery.

× it rarely runs because this is a relatively dry area.

✓ it rarely rains because this is a relatively dry area.

这里的动词应该是'rain'（下雨），而不是'runs'（跑），因为描述的是降雨情况。动词用错导致句意不清。

× Oh, I liked right weather.

✓ Oh, I like dry weather.

这里时态错误，应该用一般现在时表达习惯性动作；'right'应为'dry'，形容天气干燥。

× the wet weather always make the make the weather feel more colder than dry weather

✓ the wet weather always makes the weather feel colder than dry weather

主语是单数'singular'，动词应加's'，即'makes'；'more colder'是比较级重复，应改为'colder'。

× There there is more where?

✓ Is there more water?

句子结构混乱，疑问句应调整为'Is there more water?'，表达更清晰。

× whether should I bring my umbrella or should I bring a thicker coat or not.

✓ whether I should bring my umbrella or a thicker coat or not.

宾语从句中，助动词应放在主语之后，不能倒装。

× when I have to get out my home to office

✓ when I have to get out of my home to go to the office

动词短语应为'get out of'表示离开某地，且'go to the office'更完整。

× I think rising of temperature is the biggest one that climate change bring to us.

✓ I think the rising of temperature is the biggest effect that climate change brings to us.

缺少定冠词'the'；'bring'应与主语一致用第三人称单数'brings'；'one'改为'effect'更合适。

× we Taiwan, especially this area, we experienced umm more more typhoons in autumn and the frequency and in.

✓ In Taiwan, especially this area, we have experienced more typhoons in autumn and increased frequency.

句子不完整且重复，需调整为完整表达，'more typhoons'为复数，动词时态调整为现在完成时。

× Those extremely hot and dry weather umm made the desert,

✓ That extremely hot and dry weather made the desert,

'weather'是不可数名词，单数形式，形容词前应使用单数指示代词'that'。

× so I also want to see the scenery of dessert.

✓ so I also want to see the scenery of the desert.

'dessert'是甜点，'desert'是沙漠，拼写错误；'scenery'不可数名词，前面加定冠词'the'更合适。